Stallion
Haiku3 total reviews
Comment from dogontherocks
Nice 575 structure. You created a strong image of your horse. Why not include a picture? Good descriptive adjectives. Well done Judy.
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Nice 575 structure. You created a strong image of your horse. Why not include a picture? Good descriptive adjectives. Well done Judy.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2011
Comment from Maureen's Pen
A wonderful tribute and a wonderful graceful poem.
"Gleaming coat, chisled muscles" I especially liked that line as it created the picture of your horse.
Thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
Check spelling on chisled...should it be chiseled ??
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A wonderful tribute and a wonderful graceful poem.
"Gleaming coat, chisled muscles" I especially liked that line as it created the picture of your horse.
Thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
Check spelling on chisled...should it be chiseled ??
Comment Written 23-Jun-2011
Comment from donette1914
I felt is was well done, and it really has emotions with the stalliona, it may be shot, put powerfull , . you had strong images what makes it believable I thought the structure was very good also
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I felt is was well done, and it really has emotions with the stalliona, it may be shot, put powerfull , . you had strong images what makes it believable I thought the structure was very good also
Comment Written 23-Jun-2011
