Oh, It's you.
Where phone sex began21 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I was just looking back over contests that I've created in the past several years and saw your entry. I really enjoyed reading it. I found it very interesting and engaging. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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I was just looking back over contests that I've created in the past several years and saw your entry. I really enjoyed reading it. I found it very interesting and engaging. Excellent job!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thank you, writer723. My! All the way back to 2011. I was a virtual FS newbie back then, and entered all kinds of prompts and contests. Thank you for sponsoring this one. And thanks for the trip down memory lane. Peace, Lee
Comment from adewpearl
Eve has just a bit of attitude, huh? LOL Great one-sided dialogue.
Oh, I can just see Adam trying to explain that her sole purpose in life is so he can put his blank into her blank. LOL
Love the ending - this is too much! Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2011
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Eve has just a bit of attitude, huh? LOL Great one-sided dialogue.
Oh, I can just see Adam trying to explain that her sole purpose in life is so he can put his blank into her blank. LOL
Love the ending - this is too much! Brooke
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2011
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Thank you, Brooke. I had to try one-sided dialogue. Is that even possible? Peace, Lee
Comment from Cooper Watt
That was a riot!! Ha!
Well done, writer. Too funny. I loved the interspersed yiddish and whatnot. Well used, and well timed.
I'd like to meet this girl, she sounds like she'd be fun for a roll in the hay.
All the best, and good luck!
Coop.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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That was a riot!! Ha!
Well done, writer. Too funny. I loved the interspersed yiddish and whatnot. Well used, and well timed.
I'd like to meet this girl, she sounds like she'd be fun for a roll in the hay.
All the best, and good luck!
Coop.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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You are too much, Coop. Roll in the hay with Eve? Of Adam and Eve? Don't let me stand next to you during a lightning storm, ok? Really, Coop, thank you, and I very happy that you enjoyed.
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Comment from ScarletClearwater
I see what you did here and it's pretty funny. It didn't make sense about Woody and panties etc. until I remembered that this is a "phone call". Pretty priceless. Great job!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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I see what you did here and it's pretty funny. It didn't make sense about Woody and panties etc. until I remembered that this is a "phone call". Pretty priceless. Great job!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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Thank you, Scarlet. Yes, this was a one-sided phone call. I'm glad you enjoyed. X
Comment from Louise Michelle
Oh, nuts, I wish you posted author information with this piece because I think we may have some things in common.
At any hoot, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your flash and really like your sense of humor. Thank you for entertaining me.
Lou
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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Oh, nuts, I wish you posted author information with this piece because I think we may have some things in common.
At any hoot, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your flash and really like your sense of humor. Thank you for entertaining me.
Lou
Comment Written 18-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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Lou, I'd be happy to tell you who I am, but they are holding a gun to my head. All I can say is that I very much appreciate your kind comments, and that I hope you will vote. And send help. X
Comment from Des Beirne
I am enjoying this contest. No point adam and eve having twitter only one reader each.
It fascinates me that I try to imagine what the other person is saying.
Lots of smiles as I read this.
Good luck in the contest.
Des
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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I am enjoying this contest. No point adam and eve having twitter only one reader each.
It fascinates me that I try to imagine what the other person is saying.
Lots of smiles as I read this.
Good luck in the contest.
Des
Comment Written 18-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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Thank you, Des. It is fun to write one side, and try to intuit to the reader what else is being said. Thanks again. I hope you will vote. X
Comment from skye
Very clever, funny, makes the reader see it, feel, hear, and ultimately taste the humour. Loved the last lines.... they really bring it all together.
Very very well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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Very clever, funny, makes the reader see it, feel, hear, and ultimately taste the humour. Loved the last lines.... they really bring it all together.
Very very well done.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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Thank you, skye, I'm glad you were amused. I hope you will vote. X
Comment from Soledadpaz
Eve has no panties, but she has a phone? A miracle! If Adam had a credit card, I wonder where he would put it. Though, I do get the gist from this piece of where he wants to put IT. Great dialogue, but I wonder who ran the History Channel? The tall hairy dude? Things that make you go hmmmm. Or should I say, mmmmmm.
Sole
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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Eve has no panties, but she has a phone? A miracle! If Adam had a credit card, I wonder where he would put it. Though, I do get the gist from this piece of where he wants to put IT. Great dialogue, but I wonder who ran the History Channel? The tall hairy dude? Things that make you go hmmmm. Or should I say, mmmmmm.
Sole
:)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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F'Christ sake, Eve never has panties! Ain't you read your Bible?
As for the phone and the credit card, this is Paradise. All the creature comforts, and an ass, er, asp to boot. And youse wanta know about the History Channel? What better place to start the History Channel than the Garden of Eatin'? Sheesh, some people!
Now, did I answer all you questions, or do you wanta know about Eve's tattoo, too? Where do they get you people? X
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Hey, Christ wasn't around then, either!!! Ain't you read your Bible? Where do they get us people? I don't know. Count Adam's ribs. You would be sorry if they didn't have any of "us" people!! Wherever would you put it? Eve's tattoo, please do tell!!!
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Geez, you're so literal! Eve's tattoo is a very tasteful depiction of...oh, wait, are you over 18?
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Sadly, very over. Does it have to do with a snake? Does it point in the right direction? I hope so, for Eve's sake.
Literal is as literal does. Someone once told me that.
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It has nothing to do with a snake, Smarty Pants. It just so happens to depict a Slinky with a head...that's right, a Slinky with a head. Prove I'm wrong, I dare you. X
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Don't you dare dare me! You will be sorry! Slinky with a head! I would love to see that. You prove it, to me! I double dare you. Got a smart phone? Like Mr. Weiner?
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Oh yeah? Well, I Double-Dog Dare you to....well...oh, hell, I got nothin'.
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Au contraire!
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Au jus, so there!
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Did you say juice? Are we back to fruit again? Can you say grapes? mmmm, wine. I think I will go have a glass of "juice."
Comment from akramsaqib
It seems that writer is speaking himself on the other side too. It is a wonderful piece of writing enjoyable. The concept of Eve and Adam is marvelous. The conversation recorded here is quite real and lively.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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It seems that writer is speaking himself on the other side too. It is a wonderful piece of writing enjoyable. The concept of Eve and Adam is marvelous. The conversation recorded here is quite real and lively.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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Thank you, akramsaqib. You are correct, in that I was writing both sides of the conversation, but, as per the rules, only posted one side. I'm very pleased that you could hear both sides. Thank you again. X
Comment from Dana Tate
I thought it was funny. Especially when I read the author's notes and realized you were talking about Adam and Eve the first Humans on earth. I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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I thought it was funny. Especially when I read the author's notes and realized you were talking about Adam and Eve the first Humans on earth. I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2011
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Thank you, Dana. I hope you enjoyed, and I hope you will vote. X
