Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Part 3 Chapter 5"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, this is an awesome way to describe Anna to the readers as well. I have her in my mind's eye already,this time much more clearer than before. Interesting chapter, the aunt is a dear.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Hi, Barbara, this is an awesome way to describe Anna to the readers as well. I have her in my mind's eye already,this time much more clearer than before. Interesting chapter, the aunt is a dear.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from me_tudor
This story is really coming along! I'm going to have to go back and read so chapters I missed so I'll be up to speed but I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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This story is really coming along! I'm going to have to go back and read so chapters I missed so I'll be up to speed but I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb
What an interesting chapter of how an artist can sketch a person from your well detailed features of Anna.
Again your have a great closure to keep a reader desire to come back and read more of your story.
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Hi Barb
What an interesting chapter of how an artist can sketch a person from your well detailed features of Anna.
Again your have a great closure to keep a reader desire to come back and read more of your story.
Gert
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from glpar
I found myself wanting to look at the picture to see if it was right. Your writing makes me feel like I'm more than an observer. Well done.
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I found myself wanting to look at the picture to see if it was right. Your writing makes me feel like I'm more than an observer. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I think one must be an expert to sketch someone when all you have to go on is the perception of those who know the person. Apparently Margaret has that kind of talent and I hope Troy finds Anna when they pass the pictures out to motel owners. You make every chapter come alive for me with excellent conversations that help put me in the room. Superb chapter worth my last six!....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Hi Barbara,
I think one must be an expert to sketch someone when all you have to go on is the perception of those who know the person. Apparently Margaret has that kind of talent and I hope Troy finds Anna when they pass the pictures out to motel owners. You make every chapter come alive for me with excellent conversations that help put me in the room. Superb chapter worth my last six!....blessings, chey
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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I appreciate your kind review and continued support. Thank you.
Comment from Connie P
At least they have something to work with now. I've stopped guessing and decided to wait and see where she is ... no wait, I just had a thought LOL!!
Connie
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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At least they have something to work with now. I've stopped guessing and decided to wait and see where she is ... no wait, I just had a thought LOL!!
Connie
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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I appreciate your kind review and support.
Comment from amada
This is a very interesting chapter. To have first seat in the investigation of a missing person. Startind with the drawing of a face. fascination.
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This is a very interesting chapter. To have first seat in the investigation of a missing person. Startind with the drawing of a face. fascination.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writeaway...
Here Barbara, have a sixer for your brilliant work, you are an inspiration to everyone. Your writing is well-written and cleverly constructed as always, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Here Barbara, have a sixer for your brilliant work, you are an inspiration to everyone. Your writing is well-written and cleverly constructed as always, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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I appreciate your kind review and support.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Good write with an interesting story line which caught my attention and held on to it until I had finished reading. thanks for shagging with me. A good write.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Good write with an interesting story line which caught my attention and held on to it until I had finished reading. thanks for shagging with me. A good write.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
This was a very good, active chapter with Margaret sketching away trying to catch Anna's features. Hope Troy finds her now. She can't just up and out.
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This was a very good, active chapter with Margaret sketching away trying to catch Anna's features. Hope Troy finds her now. She can't just up and out.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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We shall see where Anna has been and what she's up too. Thank you for your kind review.
