Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Part 3 Chapter 5"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from misscookie
Aunt Margaret has a lot of patience sketching. I was glad when they stop to have pie and ice cream this is the only part of the chapter I enjoy I kept thinking about the missing girl. This is going on all over the world. It's so sad. Thank you for sharing. My friend.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Aunt Margaret has a lot of patience sketching. I was glad when they stop to have pie and ice cream this is the only part of the chapter I enjoy I kept thinking about the missing girl. This is going on all over the world. It's so sad. Thank you for sharing. My friend.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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I appreciate your kind review and support.
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Ylour very welcome, have a blessed week end.
Comment from Ure Connection
Thank you.
I felt drawn in from the start. Why was this woman sketching a loved one, what had happened to her, was she dead or still alive and what had the husband done to her?
Great opportunities for exploring things further. The style was gentle and very easy to follow and the characters easy to follow and identify.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Thank you.
I felt drawn in from the start. Why was this woman sketching a loved one, what had happened to her, was she dead or still alive and what had the husband done to her?
Great opportunities for exploring things further. The style was gentle and very easy to follow and the characters easy to follow and identify.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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According to FS this is the sixteenth chapter. If you had read the previous chapter or the background information you would know that Anna is an abused spouse. She is in hiding from her husband. Thank you for the review.
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Thank you. I look forward to reading through previous chapters.
Comment from sunnilicious
Hey Barbara!
You got such intricate details into this chapter. That peach pie and ice cream sounds just heavenly too. Just at a guess, I think Anna could be found somewhere near Bobby. Wedding?!!
Well, guess it all gets better.
Regardless of the subject, the chapter actually was an enjoyable read. Very family orient and filled with love. Well-written.
Good night.
Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Hey Barbara!
You got such intricate details into this chapter. That peach pie and ice cream sounds just heavenly too. Just at a guess, I think Anna could be found somewhere near Bobby. Wedding?!!
Well, guess it all gets better.
Regardless of the subject, the chapter actually was an enjoyable read. Very family orient and filled with love. Well-written.
Good night.
Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
This really about the fact that we don't always see the same things when we look at something or someone. You are very good with dialogue. Can't wait for more
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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This really about the fact that we don't always see the same things when we look at something or someone. You are very good with dialogue. Can't wait for more
Comment Written 17-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from JimmytheStone
Very powerful story. I love your dialog. It's remarkably real and easy to follow. The story as a whole has a very real quality that is rare to capture.
That fact that you present abuse in such a real matter of fact style brings it home.
You obviously care about people.
Jimmy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Very powerful story. I love your dialog. It's remarkably real and easy to follow. The story as a whole has a very real quality that is rare to capture.
That fact that you present abuse in such a real matter of fact style brings it home.
You obviously care about people.
Jimmy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and I appreciat your support.
Comment from fairy77
This is a really good story.The plots very interesting as the sketch is drawn.You can feel the tension and anxiety in the characters.I liked the detail and dialogue.I saw no spags.That's an excellent piece.Way to go!Beth
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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This is a really good story.The plots very interesting as the sketch is drawn.You can feel the tension and anxiety in the characters.I liked the detail and dialogue.I saw no spags.That's an excellent piece.Way to go!Beth
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from axelbeariter
"I think it's time for me to head home myself. I see I'm out numbered."/use, outnumbered----That was a perfect scenario for creating a sketch of Anna. I had to concoct one for the perp that robbed me while I drove a taxi, so I know the process. well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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"I think it's time for me to head home myself. I see I'm out numbered."/use, outnumbered----That was a perfect scenario for creating a sketch of Anna. I had to concoct one for the perp that robbed me while I drove a taxi, so I know the process. well done.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from writerwish
I love this story. It holds me captive through the whole thing. I usually don't like just romance, but I think I like it cause the crisis is in their too.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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I love this story. It holds me captive through the whole thing. I usually don't like just romance, but I think I like it cause the crisis is in their too.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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I always write in a crisis in my romance novels. I see no reason for pure romance, life isn't that way. Some of my others are fighting drug cartels and my last one a kidnapping and a child porn ring.
Comment from ksherwoodrn
As usual, nicely written in a way that keeps the readers interest. Abuse is such a horrible thing that is lived with by so many every day....something God certainly never intended...blessings, kathleen
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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As usual, nicely written in a way that keeps the readers interest. Abuse is such a horrible thing that is lived with by so many every day....something God certainly never intended...blessings, kathleen
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
There's involved and then there's INVOLVED, right?
Sometimes people are just naturally drawn to people
even when they know it's not in their best interest
but there's no accounting for love.
I'm always amazed by the skills of people who can
sketch people without ever seeing them and coming up
with such a great likeness.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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barbara:
There's involved and then there's INVOLVED, right?
Sometimes people are just naturally drawn to people
even when they know it's not in their best interest
but there's no accounting for love.
I'm always amazed by the skills of people who can
sketch people without ever seeing them and coming up
with such a great likeness.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
