Pregnant
She's unsure about his reaction to the news2 total reviews
Comment from manicblue
I liked this! It fits the criteria and you included punctuation (something not seen much in these types of poems). And it told a very happy story. Well done.
My only critique is to add a picture, don't know what it'd be, but maybe a smiling couple? Just a thought. Please take care!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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I liked this! It fits the criteria and you included punctuation (something not seen much in these types of poems). And it told a very happy story. Well done.
My only critique is to add a picture, don't know what it'd be, but maybe a smiling couple? Just a thought. Please take care!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Bravo. A sweet little poem in keeping with the requirements. Three lines that brought a smile to my face. An original and creative composition. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Bravo. A sweet little poem in keeping with the requirements. Three lines that brought a smile to my face. An original and creative composition. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Thanks for your kind words.
