Comment from miss joyce

Excellent

I, personally don't speak or read french. It didn't seem to stand in my way of adapting the accent which helps to pick up on the twists of the language. In any event, this was entertaining and a delight to read.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011

Thank you for your kind words.
Steve

reply by miss joyce on 09-Jun-2011

You're welcome, Steve!

Comment from WilliamDeen

Excellent

GREAT French poem! Knew just enough to get by!!!


At my place (or Chez Moi)
Where my fiance waited
For risque menage a trois!

Ah this I understood!! LOL...Thanks so much for sharing, Pamela

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011

Oh to have such an understanding and obliging fiance! Glad you limited French was enough to appreciate this bit of silliness.
Steve

Comment from zwrite1

Excellent

very funny. Humerous poems are so much fun and so memorable. They should be taken more seriously! This poem would be so much fun to read aloud, it would be a real crowd pleaser, even with the liberties you mentioned above. It is so cleverly written that I can over-look any faux pas. You have made me want to practice my French. It is such a sexy language.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011

Thank you for your kind review. Sexy language indeed. Do you know the fabulous scene in 'A Fish Called Wanda' where John Cleese seduces Jamie Lee Curtis? Except that was in German!
Steve

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

Merci monseur!!
It is not the best French I have heard but effective for the purpose.
The purist will actually shun work like this but I must say to me it was a pleasurable read.
Well done

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011

Thanks for the review and the kind words. No purists belong on this site!
Steve