Tae a Bumble Bee.
Ma bumble bum is meant tae be.13 total reviews
Comment from miss joyce
This is a cute and apt illustration of how a day in the bumbble bees life might seem. His bum must get very sore and the reason I am here today is to catch up. Thanks for the reads!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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This is a cute and apt illustration of how a day in the bumbble bees life might seem. His bum must get very sore and the reason I am here today is to catch up. Thanks for the reads!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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They might have sore Bums Bonny Lass the way they fly but they are so beautiful.
Thanks again you are so kind.
The Auld Yin
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This was a sweet illustration in poetic write. Loved it and you are welcome for my review,priviledged, as always!
Comment from ulster3
Well hello Alex...
This is a grand wee poem...quite brilliant! It brings tae mine Robbie's 'To A Mouse', an ah did a wee take-off 'To A Moose'. LOL. It was tae mak fun 'o that daft Palin woman.
I was schooled at N.K.S. in Glasgow. Great artwork in your profile. You have an idyllic lifestyle in a lovely place. I'm in the U.S.A.
Warmly, Rebecca
I'm awa tae ma wee bed the noo....
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Well hello Alex...
This is a grand wee poem...quite brilliant! It brings tae mine Robbie's 'To A Mouse', an ah did a wee take-off 'To A Moose'. LOL. It was tae mak fun 'o that daft Palin woman.
I was schooled at N.K.S. in Glasgow. Great artwork in your profile. You have an idyllic lifestyle in a lovely place. I'm in the U.S.A.
Warmly, Rebecca
I'm awa tae ma wee bed the noo....
Comment Written 10-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Night night Bonny Lass,sleep tight. Thanks for a brammer review.
The Auld Yin.
Comment from Tillom Gliss
I came by for a poetry fix and was not disappointed! This humorous lil' poem put a smile on my face and warmed my heart! I've missed reading your work! I should come by more frequently...maybe I will. Another great poem, Auld Yin!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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I came by for a poetry fix and was not disappointed! This humorous lil' poem put a smile on my face and warmed my heart! I've missed reading your work! I should come by more frequently...maybe I will. Another great poem, Auld Yin!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Jings great to hear from you Bonny jo. This is the first poem for a while. Just getting over a few reviews that did not go my way:( Was told that my accent was irritable among other things.What the heck I enjoy writing this way so I will not change. Hope to see you more often.
The Auld Yin.
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Well, all art is subjective isn't it...I believe in staying true to yourself! And I happen to love who you are! Don't change a thing!
Comment from juliaSjames
Welcome back, Alex! I've missed your unique posts, and your amazing humour. LOL
"Ma bumble bum is meant tae be,
an' a beautiful sicht ye'll niver see."
I suggest in the last line,
"a more beautiful sicht ye'll niver see." - if you've got it, flaunt it!
Love that Scottish burr ...
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Welcome back, Alex! I've missed your unique posts, and your amazing humour. LOL
"Ma bumble bum is meant tae be,
an' a beautiful sicht ye'll niver see."
I suggest in the last line,
"a more beautiful sicht ye'll niver see." - if you've got it, flaunt it!
Love that Scottish burr ...
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Thanks for that Bonny Lass and the hint about the last line:) I have changed it just to flaunt:)
The Auld Yin.
Comment from marym224
Don't you dare stop writing in this vernacular, Alex. I love listening to accents, especially when they're reading poetry, because it definitely adds charisma. I have an acquaintance who claims to be Blackpool's Tesco Poet, and he talks like George Formby. Luckily the majority of his poetry is humourous, so that's just as well, because I'm laughing as soon as I hear him begin! Take it from me, Alex, you'd be sorely missed if you thought of giving this excellent talent away. Keep it coming, young Scotsman! Regards, Mary
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Don't you dare stop writing in this vernacular, Alex. I love listening to accents, especially when they're reading poetry, because it definitely adds charisma. I have an acquaintance who claims to be Blackpool's Tesco Poet, and he talks like George Formby. Luckily the majority of his poetry is humourous, so that's just as well, because I'm laughing as soon as I hear him begin! Take it from me, Alex, you'd be sorely missed if you thought of giving this excellent talent away. Keep it coming, young Scotsman! Regards, Mary
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Just getting a wee bit enthusiasm back again Bonny Lass. thanks for the great review and encouragement.
The Auld Yin.
Comment from Espresso momma
Welcome back dear ole friend. So glad to hear your bumble bee poem. With summer here and the bees all around, you have chosen a grand ole sound..
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Welcome back dear ole friend. So glad to hear your bumble bee poem. With summer here and the bees all around, you have chosen a grand ole sound..
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Ta Bonny Lass thank you for a great review:)
The Auld Yin.
Comment from words
Great to see you back, my Scottish friend.
Have missed your musical verse.
Was out hiking the other day and I saw this charming sight:
Ah fly aboot wae a heavy bumbly bum,
lookin' fur fluers in the midday sun.
So happy to have you back with us. What have you been up too?
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Great to see you back, my Scottish friend.
Have missed your musical verse.
Was out hiking the other day and I saw this charming sight:
Ah fly aboot wae a heavy bumbly bum,
lookin' fur fluers in the midday sun.
So happy to have you back with us. What have you been up too?
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Not been up to much words Bonny Lass. This is the first wee poem for a while.Trying to get the old enthusiasm back.
Thanks for noticing and a great review.
The Auld Yin.
Comment from poetbear
Lved it and hearing you read it was a joy. Cute,sweet, insightful, and plain fun.
A must read for the rhyme and flow.
Great poetic technique. A must read for a little gem.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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Lved it and hearing you read it was a joy. Cute,sweet, insightful, and plain fun.
A must read for the rhyme and flow.
Great poetic technique. A must read for a little gem.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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Great to hear you had fun reading this wee banter. That's what it is all about; having fun.
Thanks again for your generous review.
The Auld Yin.
Comment from adewpearl
Alex, how lovely to see you and your bumblebee - I love how the bumblebee has a bumbly bum - Your humor is great, as always. Your rhyming couplets are strong, the dialect still makes me smile as much as ever, and the cadence is steady, a joy to hear you read aloud :-) Any day you post is a good day. Brooke
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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Alex, how lovely to see you and your bumblebee - I love how the bumblebee has a bumbly bum - Your humor is great, as always. Your rhyming couplets are strong, the dialect still makes me smile as much as ever, and the cadence is steady, a joy to hear you read aloud :-) Any day you post is a good day. Brooke
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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Had fun with this one Brooke Bonny Lass. Might just give me a kick in the behind to get me going. Thanks a million for your great encouragement.
The Auld Yin.
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I sure hope it kicks you into gear!!! I miss you so much when you are absent :-)
Comment from Judian James
It's been ages Alex. Have you not been posting much? Anyway, it was fun to find a post from you this morning and a sweet one it is that brought a good laugh, and I love reading in the Scottish accent!!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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It's been ages Alex. Have you not been posting much? Anyway, it was fun to find a post from you this morning and a sweet one it is that brought a good laugh, and I love reading in the Scottish accent!!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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Nope first for a while Judian. Plucked up courage to write jist a wee poem. Have had a good reaction so it might just spur me on:(
The Auld Yin.
