Sauvignon Blanc Grapes
Artistic Photo in 'Still Life' style200 total reviews
Comment from egmosley
Tom,
Your visual is very potent--like your wine probably is. I like the contrast of green and white. I reminds me of purity and clarity--all coupled with the flavor and scent of the wine--I've been schooled as well.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2011
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Tom,
Your visual is very potent--like your wine probably is. I like the contrast of green and white. I reminds me of purity and clarity--all coupled with the flavor and scent of the wine--I've been schooled as well.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2011
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Thanks, Egmosley. That's a great review.
Comment from DionysusDeVille
I can imagine this looking like a picture of pure fineness. And i would love to taste that type of wine, It sounds absolutely delicious. Good job
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2011
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I can imagine this looking like a picture of pure fineness. And i would love to taste that type of wine, It sounds absolutely delicious. Good job
Comment Written 18-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2011
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Thanks, Kirby. Great review.
Comment from DALLAS01
You have painted a picture that tantalizes the palate. It is as though the wine is processing in these three very short lines. No picture necessary.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2011
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You have painted a picture that tantalizes the palate. It is as though the wine is processing in these three very short lines. No picture necessary.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2011
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Thanks, Dallas. Appreciate that.
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you're welcome.
Comment from Jay Squires
A poem of the purity of the grape and the virgin-white quality of the Wedgewood plate.
Tomprato you are indeed a lover of the simplicity and purity of the irreducible: the grape that is the birthplace of the wine.
Blessings,
Jay
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2011
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A poem of the purity of the grape and the virgin-white quality of the Wedgewood plate.
Tomprato you are indeed a lover of the simplicity and purity of the irreducible: the grape that is the birthplace of the wine.
Blessings,
Jay
Comment Written 17-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2011
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Thanks, Jay. Appreciate your lovely review.
Comment from rashi kumar
An excellent 5/7/5 poem!
No forced rhyming,a steady tenor throughout.
Vintage work,simple and elegant,
additionally tempting!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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An excellent 5/7/5 poem!
No forced rhyming,a steady tenor throughout.
Vintage work,simple and elegant,
additionally tempting!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you, Rashi. Blessings.
Comment from thepurplescribe
The poem does capture quite a visual image. Nature does make its own art, a special kind to which all human artists aspire. The process of making the wine and the plates represent for me the coming together of natural with human arts of the highest order.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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The poem does capture quite a visual image. Nature does make its own art, a special kind to which all human artists aspire. The process of making the wine and the plates represent for me the coming together of natural with human arts of the highest order.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thanks, purple scribe.I appreciate your lovely remarks.
Comment from lexida
You wrote a wonderful Haiku poem. It present strong images. The structure of the poem make sense. I would recommend it to someone else. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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You wrote a wonderful Haiku poem. It present strong images. The structure of the poem make sense. I would recommend it to someone else. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thanks, Lexida. Appreciate yr review.
Comment from Sammy105
YOu didn't... grasp me like you did the person who labeled this all-time best. But you struck my curiosity for how grapes can be translucent?
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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YOu didn't... grasp me like you did the person who labeled this all-time best. But you struck my curiosity for how grapes can be translucent?
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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You've never seen grapes, my friends. I never said transparent. It's translucent.
Comment from Charmane
I enjoy this poem because it is so calming and serene.
The content just makes you move your lips in anticipation of the wetting of the lips. The word winery comes to mind and I roam back to embrace the poem again. It has a lullaby effect on me because it sets the pace for a wonderful late night snack! Cheese, crackers,and more grapes are the culprits that add zest and fullfillment to this scene.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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I enjoy this poem because it is so calming and serene.
The content just makes you move your lips in anticipation of the wetting of the lips. The word winery comes to mind and I roam back to embrace the poem again. It has a lullaby effect on me because it sets the pace for a wonderful late night snack! Cheese, crackers,and more grapes are the culprits that add zest and fullfillment to this scene.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Only good? Not excellent?
Comment from DrCarter2001
Nicely done, Tom. Very clever use of specific phrases like Sauvignon vintage, Wedgwood, and translucent to evoke clear images and tell your story in just three lines. A great entry for this contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Nicely done, Tom. Very clever use of specific phrases like Sauvignon vintage, Wedgwood, and translucent to evoke clear images and tell your story in just three lines. A great entry for this contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you, Dr Carter. Yes, those 4 words were employed to create the mood and the colour of the poem.
