Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Part 1, Chapter 5"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from denhagan
This was a very interesting chapter part to read about Troy going to meet with Anna's parents to see if they know where she might be. I enjoyed reading this interesting piece of writing. It held my interest all the way through.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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This was a very interesting chapter part to read about Troy going to meet with Anna's parents to see if they know where she might be. I enjoyed reading this interesting piece of writing. It held my interest all the way through.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You are quite welcome. ~denhagan
Comment from Mara del Mar
I like this story! I read a few chapters (not all) but I love this character of Troy, is really interested in Anna. For its part, the horror of the things she lived makes is hidden to him, but time and perseverance may be the allies of our friend. Wonderful chapter, congratulations!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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I like this story! I read a few chapters (not all) but I love this character of Troy, is really interested in Anna. For its part, the horror of the things she lived makes is hidden to him, but time and perseverance may be the allies of our friend. Wonderful chapter, congratulations!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janie King
A busy lady for sure..I'm a little at adisavantage since I've not read any of the other parts of this but I had no problem following this segment. I'll try to go back and catch up on someof the previous chapters. God bless.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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A busy lady for sure..I'm a little at adisavantage since I've not read any of the other parts of this but I had no problem following this segment. I'll try to go back and catch up on someof the previous chapters. God bless.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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thank you for your kind review
Comment from Arkine
I had this whole rant I was going to write about the dad being a complete .... and then he goes and asks about how she's really doing. I suppose that could have all been the mother's doing, but maybe not.
Great chapter!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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I had this whole rant I was going to write about the dad being a complete .... and then he goes and asks about how she's really doing. I suppose that could have all been the mother's doing, but maybe not.
Great chapter!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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I think Dad's bark is worse than his bite. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Leonidus07
An extremely good story, with no errors in spelling or grammar that I noticed. IT just goes to show you how far one mother will go to protect her son, even hiding from the people she loves.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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An extremely good story, with no errors in spelling or grammar that I noticed. IT just goes to show you how far one mother will go to protect her son, even hiding from the people she loves.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
I was hoping that she would be there and safe but I guess there is more suspense needed before you save her. I saw no need for editing.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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I was hoping that she would be there and safe but I guess there is more suspense needed before you save her. I saw no need for editing.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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It will be awhile before Anna tells us where she's hiding. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from glpar
I'm glad you were able to post this with all you have going on. I am enjoying following along with this story. It is well written and the father rings true.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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I'm glad you were able to post this with all you have going on. I am enjoying following along with this story. It is well written and the father rings true.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
ANOTHER EXCELLENT CHAPTER! I LIKE HOW YOU BROUGHT OUT THE CHARACTER OF HER PARENTS. AS ALWAYS, IT'S A JOY TO READ YOUR STORIES. HAPPY CELEBRATION!!
GOD BLESS YOU BARBARA!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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ANOTHER EXCELLENT CHAPTER! I LIKE HOW YOU BROUGHT OUT THE CHARACTER OF HER PARENTS. AS ALWAYS, IT'S A JOY TO READ YOUR STORIES. HAPPY CELEBRATION!!
GOD BLESS YOU BARBARA!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from WilliamDeen
Good work and a good introduction of Anna's parents. The old man acts mean but is softhearted. An enjoyable read and thanks for sharing. billy
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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Good work and a good introduction of Anna's parents. The old man acts mean but is softhearted. An enjoyable read and thanks for sharing. billy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amada
THIS is a very well written chapter. It sent me straight on looking for Anna's wherebouts as well. Well and effective dialogue.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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THIS is a very well written chapter. It sent me straight on looking for Anna's wherebouts as well. Well and effective dialogue.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
