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What Beauty Fills The Sky This Day

Old Glory waves

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Comment from patcelaw
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may the beauty of this flag wave for all to see. Make us a people worthy of the meaning of those colors. Blessings for a safe holiday. patricia

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


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Comment from benoenose
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The expression of colors within the flags gives profound insights. This unique identity of a simple flag and the color teaches us more. Read by all those love the country and the flag.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


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Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good picture to go with your poem.
-Good rhyme that makes the poem flow.
-The first stanza is a good introduction to what today means.
-You share many meaningful thoughts.
No matter where or when
Our flag is a true representation
Of who we are
And where we have been.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015


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Comment from Chris Tee
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This is an excellent poem commemorating memorial day and it flows so well with excellent unforced rhyming it it as well. Well done indeed with this great poem.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015


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Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Nice Memorial Day tribute you have written here. As a proud United States Army veteran I can fully appreciate your writing. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015


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Comment from reconciled
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I'm very proud to be an American...and very proud of our flag...and country...we have fought for our freedom...and wonderful poem...and a wonderful picture

 Comment Written 23-May-2015


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Comment from Oatmeal
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DANPALD,

The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings. They were very understandable and comprehensible.

Not any problem or error.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 23-May-2015


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Comment from Benny Beeharry
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The flag is always a pride. It tells more stories that one can remember.some have fallen ,some live on . Still we need to remember and have faith.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 23-May-2015


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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem is a great commentary on the respect our flag should receive but does not at all times. Good job. The picture is awesome.

One SPAG: Does the heart not breath a sigh [breathe]

Thanks for sharing. Have a great Memorial Day.

 Comment Written 22-May-2015


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Comment from inside echo
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I have travelled to many places, but not many can compare to the patriotism of the American people. Though governments conflict, people protest against authorities in the street, the people never waiver from their flag. Your rhyme and flow are great, the content also. Your words are powerful. Thank you for sharing.
Well done.
echo

 Comment Written 22-May-2015


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reply by inside echo on 23-May-2015
    You are welcome.