A Funny hog
A funny hog jerk the frog .2 total reviews
Comment from miss joyce
As there is nothing in the box, my review will then turn to the notes for my thorough review...I like frogs so therefore he needs rescuing...when you have the time, perhaps you can help the little fellow out of his demise...
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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As there is nothing in the box, my review will then turn to the notes for my thorough review...I like frogs so therefore he needs rescuing...when you have the time, perhaps you can help the little fellow out of his demise...
Comment Written 25-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Thank you dear Joyce , thank you Carolina carol you're ! Tumarma .
Comment from onceinabluemoon
Maybe it's too late, but I must admit, I don't quite get it. I'll re-look tomorrow, by the morning light, see if it makes more sense. But one thing I can say for sure - you have white text on cream background, and it is unreadable without highlighting. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Maybe it's too late, but I must admit, I don't quite get it. I'll re-look tomorrow, by the morning light, see if it makes more sense. But one thing I can say for sure - you have white text on cream background, and it is unreadable without highlighting. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 25-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Thanks for response . A funny hog is my first 5-7-5 poem . So many more I didn't know . I'm learning from you and all the others .
Thank you very much to read my poem . Tumarma .
