Spring Sun
Soak up the sunshine31 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Soft morning sunshine
peeks between the bobbing leaves
Soothing restless souls
Such a soothing choice of words, Susan.
Good to see you writing again, my friend.
Good luck to you.
Margaret
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Soft morning sunshine
peeks between the bobbing leaves
Soothing restless souls
Such a soothing choice of words, Susan.
Good to see you writing again, my friend.
Good luck to you.
Margaret
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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HI Margaret~ I am just checking in a minute~ Thank you! I am thrilled that you liked this quick little effort. I sure miss you and I have some more bird magazines to get to you too~ I hope you and Colin are happy and well! Love and miss you~ ")) Susan
Comment from BethShelby
It is good to see you writing something again. It is a peaceful picture you paint with your words even though you are feeling particularly peaceful yourself right now. I hope you soon find what you're looking for and can get back to normal.
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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It is good to see you writing something again. It is a peaceful picture you paint with your words even though you are feeling particularly peaceful yourself right now. I hope you soon find what you're looking for and can get back to normal.
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Hi Beth~ Thank you so much~ I sure hope the tornadoes are missing you~ I think of you every time I watch the weather and see the beautiful shape of your state!~ Thanks for this kind review...I miss you. xoxo, susan
Comment from missy98writer
Susan,
your poem is superbly written. Effective use of alliteration. Your art work is pretty. I love your satori line. Your Haiku is excellent. Your poem is a real contender in the writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest. Keep on writing proper Haiku. Are you doing fine, my friend.
Melissa!
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Susan,
your poem is superbly written. Effective use of alliteration. Your art work is pretty. I love your satori line. Your Haiku is excellent. Your poem is a real contender in the writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest. Keep on writing proper Haiku. Are you doing fine, my friend.
Melissa!
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Hi there Melissa~ Thank you my dear friend! I have a house, now lots of work for sure...I mowed the new yard today...two and a half hours. I enjoyed it. But this is temporary...too close to the freeway. Beggars can't be choosers tho. ")) I hope you are happy and feeling good these days. LOVE and miss you~ xoxo, susan
Comment from chita
Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-I love your poem and how you write about how the sun peeks through the leaves to soothe our souls--I like where you write(Soothing restless souls) an excellent write-great job.
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Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-I love your poem and how you write about how the sun peeks through the leaves to soothe our souls--I like where you write(Soothing restless souls) an excellent write-great job.
Comment Written 21-May-2011
Comment from sopranodebs
A beautiful poem filled with the warmth of nature. Yes it is soothing to those who need that fresh first sunray to feed their souls. Thank you for sharing. No spag, technically correct haiku. good luck in contest
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A beautiful poem filled with the warmth of nature. Yes it is soothing to those who need that fresh first sunray to feed their souls. Thank you for sharing. No spag, technically correct haiku. good luck in contest
Comment Written 21-May-2011
Comment from adewpearl
Susan, your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form.
I like the alliteration of soft sunshine soothing souls
I also like the personification of the sunshine in this serene and soothing poem - a lovely visual too :-) Brooke
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Susan, your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form.
I like the alliteration of soft sunshine soothing souls
I also like the personification of the sunshine in this serene and soothing poem - a lovely visual too :-) Brooke
Comment Written 21-May-2011
Comment from Deejharrington
I wish you the best of luck in the contest. This is certainly a contender. I especially liked the last line. I believe winter seems to trap all of us physically and mentally. The warm weather and sunshine certainly "soothes restless souls".Very well done.
dj
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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I wish you the best of luck in the contest. This is certainly a contender. I especially liked the last line. I believe winter seems to trap all of us physically and mentally. The warm weather and sunshine certainly "soothes restless souls".Very well done.
dj
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Thank you very much D.J. !! SO sorry for this late reply...just now getting back! :)) Susan
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You're welcome. No problem. I have been off line myself.
deb
Comment from Veekz
Lovely sentiment, the feeling of longing for peace you create is just wonderful. I've been thinking of you lately my friend, you're never far from my mind. Hoping you're ok xx
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2011
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Lovely sentiment, the feeling of longing for peace you create is just wonderful. I've been thinking of you lately my friend, you're never far from my mind. Hoping you're ok xx
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2011
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HI Jess!! SO SORRY for this horribly late reply. I have gotten moved, however the idiots are now using planes to harass. The drive is far off the road, so now it's planes. GD a-holes. !!!! Sorry. It's just ridiculous. Thank you for this great and most welcome review Jessie!! ALL my best to you!! Susan
Comment from angel123
Your Haiku poem is very well written with a lot of meaning. Your last sentence is my favorite. It held my attention and I have no suggestions for any changes.
Angel123
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Your Haiku poem is very well written with a lot of meaning. Your last sentence is my favorite. It held my attention and I have no suggestions for any changes.
Angel123
Comment Written 21-May-2011
Comment from Trybuck
Hope your spring is refreshing as well... It's been a while since I've read anything from you... I'm not doing no ways the reviewing as I once was. Hope life is good for you, Buck
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Hope your spring is refreshing as well... It's been a while since I've read anything from you... I'm not doing no ways the reviewing as I once was. Hope life is good for you, Buck
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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HI Buck, thank you very much! I moved just after posting this, please forgive me this late reply? I am still in the harassment. Only one cure for it...so. Sadly, there are certain 'elements' who just think they can do as they please to whomever they please. I need to get the Feds in here. HA. Thank you for the kind thoughts tho...it does help. S.
