Comment from Mr.muttley

Excellent

Well put after all we are equal as humans as nature demands. It is unfortunate as a race we judge others by monetary, instead of creations equality. Great depth that makes you think. Good luck

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2011

Thanks muttley, for your inspiring comment.

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

Hello Savithree, how are you? I am from Hyderabad, India and currently, I live in the U.S. Glad to see your posting today, your poem is a profound write and thought provoking, please check the second line as it has 8-syllables, if I may suggest, if you replace 'every' with all, that'd make it 7-syllables. Great job and good luck.

 Comment Written 20-May-2011

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reply by the author on 20-May-2011

Thank you very much indeed. I will make the correction.

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

This is entry number 514 that i have read so far.
this contest is very fierce and it will be hard to select a winner here
Well done her and good luck.

 Comment Written 19-May-2011

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reply by the author on 20-May-2011

Thanks.

Comment from angelwings2011

Average

My rating is on form only.
You have 9 syllables in the
second line. Your subject
matter is an important one
and well expressed.

 Comment Written 19-May-2011

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reply by the author on 19-May-2011

Thanks for the comment. what does inportant mean?

reply by angelwings2011 on 19-May-2011

Important means serious, of great significance.

reply by angelwings2011 on 19-May-2011

Sorry about my misspelling