Distance
The poem is about loving someone who lives far.2 total reviews
Comment from mumsyone
How far's faraway?
Near, when I've you in my heart
Love leaps all distance
I like this 5-7-5 poem which says so much about the power of love in so few words. I wish you all the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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How far's faraway?
Near, when I've you in my heart
Love leaps all distance
I like this 5-7-5 poem which says so much about the power of love in so few words. I wish you all the best in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Thanks a lot for your encouraging comments.
Comment from adewpearl
lemmz, your poem is in good 5/7/5 form.
I like that you open with a question and the sound of far's faraway
Good alliteration in love leaps.
I like the romantic message that love conquers all, or at least distance :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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lemmz, your poem is in good 5/7/5 form.
I like that you open with a question and the sound of far's faraway
Good alliteration in love leaps.
I like the romantic message that love conquers all, or at least distance :-) Brooke
Comment Written 16-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Thank you, adewpearl.
