Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Part two Chapter four"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from adewpearl
Anna is lucky to come across so many people sympathetic to her cause and willing to reach out to help. From everything I know about the world, your story is very realistic - so many abusive spouses also seem to believe they are the victims, that everyone else is to blame for their misery. Bobby is no exaggeration. Brooke
reply by the author on 15-May-2011
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Anna is lucky to come across so many people sympathetic to her cause and willing to reach out to help. From everything I know about the world, your story is very realistic - so many abusive spouses also seem to believe they are the victims, that everyone else is to blame for their misery. Bobby is no exaggeration. Brooke
Comment Written 15-May-2011
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I happen to know somebody that he is patterned after. It started with his mother, who believed he could do no wrong. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, another great chapter and i enjoyed reading it, i can't wait to see how the older woman is going to help anna
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, another great chapter and i enjoyed reading it, i can't wait to see how the older woman is going to help anna
Comment Written 15-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from moyramouse
Oh we knew Bobby would show up sooner or later and he showed his true colours. There were plenty of witnesses to his threatening behaviour so I am sure that little Michael would not be released to him. I wonder what Ellen Collier is going to suggest. She seems to be very sure she can help. xxxmouse
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Oh we knew Bobby would show up sooner or later and he showed his true colours. There were plenty of witnesses to his threatening behaviour so I am sure that little Michael would not be released to him. I wonder what Ellen Collier is going to suggest. She seems to be very sure she can help. xxxmouse
Comment Written 15-May-2011
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We will have to wait and see how Ellen helps Anna. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a short post but very interesting. Domestic violence is a serious issue that requires urgent attention from all governments. Very well done
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This is a short post but very interesting. Domestic violence is a serious issue that requires urgent attention from all governments. Very well done
Comment Written 15-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Another great chapter my friend. I seen what a man like this can do and it's not pretty to say the least--death is usually the end result. The chapter was great and I'm glad to see you've put up the National Domestic Violence hotline up with this story. Keep up the good writing my friend.
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Another great chapter my friend. I seen what a man like this can do and it's not pretty to say the least--death is usually the end result. The chapter was great and I'm glad to see you've put up the National Domestic Violence hotline up with this story. Keep up the good writing my friend.
Comment Written 15-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from dbmccarter
Just the right sense of urgency for this part. The rest will be nerve-wracking I'm sure. I hope you are going to show how she can over come this but I know you are.
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Just the right sense of urgency for this part. The rest will be nerve-wracking I'm sure. I hope you are going to show how she can over come this but I know you are.
Comment Written 15-May-2011
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Yes, Anna will live happily every after. It is a romance. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi girlfriend, this was a good chapter inspite of it being short. Now others can see what type of louse this Bobby is. It's going to count against him.
Nicr progression to the story. Well done. luv jada
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Hi girlfriend, this was a good chapter inspite of it being short. Now others can see what type of louse this Bobby is. It's going to count against him.
Nicr progression to the story. Well done. luv jada
Comment Written 15-May-2011
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Thank you girlfriend, for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This Bobby needs keeping
in a cage. He's a danger
not only to his wife, but
to his baby son who will
need his mother.
No one should have to put up with such violence.
A great chapter, Barbara.
Margaret
reply by the author on 15-May-2011
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This Bobby needs keeping
in a cage. He's a danger
not only to his wife, but
to his baby son who will
need his mother.
No one should have to put up with such violence.
A great chapter, Barbara.
Margaret
Comment Written 15-May-2011
reply by the author on 15-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from The Stranger
I was waiting for the next installment and with every right to, as the story remains as captivating as ever, this is a great piece of writing
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I was waiting for the next installment and with every right to, as the story remains as captivating as ever, this is a great piece of writing
Comment Written 15-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Recovered
you're story is very true to life... i was in an abusive relationship thank god there was no child involved. this is a story that needs to be told over and over... bravo for braving such a tough subject.
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you're story is very true to life... i was in an abusive relationship thank god there was no child involved. this is a story that needs to be told over and over... bravo for braving such a tough subject.
Comment Written 15-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
