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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from volcomfury
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I read the first part and found it very interesting and a fun read overall. This piece was equally as fascinating, and I look forward to more.

 Comment Written 17-May-2011


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Comment from Readywriter52
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The nurse handled Bobby very well. She recognized him as being a very abusive person. Anna needs to get her life together and deal with Bobby. Bobby wants to use the child as a club against his wife. I hope Anna can get help.

 Comment Written 17-May-2011


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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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barbara:

This is another excellent post. One of the foster
brothers I had growing up was also a bully when he
grew up. He got barred from the hospital when he
made a scene when his wife was diagnosed with cancer.
He wanted her to come home to provide for "his" needs.
Even though I had told her to leave him many times
prior to that, she was able to leave him after that.
Thanks for sharing.

thanks for sharing
love,
jan

 Comment Written 17-May-2011


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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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Again, I am so glad you are writing about this. Well written segment and I am glad she is being offered help and hope she has the strength to take it as many women don't~Debbie

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Comment from mumsyone
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This is a good continuation of your story. What a helpless feeling it must be for someone like Anna. It's nice that you include the hotline numbers in your notes.

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Comment from Gunjann
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I don't read romance fictions much but the title of your fiction has attracted me and I went through it...its awesome...I enjoyed reading it...great piece of work

 Comment Written 17-May-2011


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Comment from shy1250
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continues excellent. Your heroine is brave and likable, her situation one familiar for far too many women. I'll be interested in the next chapter, but you should take great encouragement from the two ribbons! Kudos! later and God bless, shy

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Barb
Shot Barb but what is in this chapter is the best thing that is happening for Anna
Now people will realize what a terrible person Bobby is and how he treats his wife and son.
Gert

 Comment Written 17-May-2011


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Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
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What I love about this chapter, Barbara, is that when bad secrets are revealed; help comes from out of the woodwork - so to speak. An excellent job; I hope others catch this too.

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Comment from ulster3
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Hello barbara...
This chapter is so good i was sorry to see it end. I just love that nurse! It is always good to learn of a compassionate character. Thanks for a good, but brief, read.
Warmly, Rebecca

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