Slamming door
Door slamming shut.2 total reviews
Comment from penelope
Ah, so you found a logical explanation for the slamming door, and on a day like that, you're better off snuggling inside. I like the way you build up the suspense. The only thing I can suggest is to reword the last line: It was the wicked wind. Nice alliteration with wicked wind. Penelope
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Ah, so you found a logical explanation for the slamming door, and on a day like that, you're better off snuggling inside. I like the way you build up the suspense. The only thing I can suggest is to reword the last line: It was the wicked wind. Nice alliteration with wicked wind. Penelope
Comment Written 14-May-2011
Comment from sweetwoodjax
hey mike this is very well written, but you entered the wrong prompt, the contest you should have entered is today's writing prompt, just wanted to let you know so you can change it.
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hey mike this is very well written, but you entered the wrong prompt, the contest you should have entered is today's writing prompt, just wanted to let you know so you can change it.
Comment Written 14-May-2011
