Comment from lola29

Excellent

Bill, your entry is very thought-provoking, to say the least. But, I'm hoping the change involves more than just opinions among varyig groups of people. President Obama, in my opinion is a gansta ninja.

 Comment Written 12-May-2011

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reply by the author on 12-May-2011

Hi Lola - thanks for reading and special thanks for making me laugh. "gangsta ninja" - sounds like a good start for a 5-7-5 yourself. Warm regards, Bill

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Okay, I admit it. I had to look up phylum.
You happy now?

You are sly, Bill, and your commentary is right on.
Still, I wonder whether the ass and the trunk
aren't descendant from different ends of
the same phylum.

Thanks for the word-of-the-day.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 12-May-2011

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reply by the author on 12-May-2011

Thanks for reading Lee, and for a review that made me smile! Regards, Bill

Comment from The Stranger

Excellent

as we say in the uk, all politicians piss in the same pot, irrelevant of their chosen party, the only consistant thing is the public suffering

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 Comment Written 12-May-2011

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reply by the author on 12-May-2011

Love the analogy! Regards, Bill

Comment from Narvik

Excellent

Now the heck with all that flowery, romantic, pie-in-the-sky poetry. This is what I call a REAL poem with substance. Seems we're both independent-minded when it comes to politics. Don't follow those elephants and donkeys around. Look what you step into.

Loved it, Bill.

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 Comment Written 12-May-2011

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reply by the author on 12-May-2011

Thanks CJ - You're right, the only thing they have in common is they both defacate! Regards, Bill