Whispers in Shadows
A Dark Club Poem48 total reviews
Comment from keimosobie
You know I just got the worst writing block. So I am reading your poems hopefully something will hit me hard good luck. Great poem as dark as usually.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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You know I just got the worst writing block. So I am reading your poems hopefully something will hit me hard good luck. Great poem as dark as usually.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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WOW! Thanks for reviewing this piece, I was very proud of this write...dark lord
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You should be it held great emotions took me breath away
Comment from stephybs
Excellent work here! Very dark and spooky. Great art work excellent colors as always and so very well written. Well done really gripping stuff. Stephy
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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Excellent work here! Very dark and spooky. Great art work excellent colors as always and so very well written. Well done really gripping stuff. Stephy
Comment Written 13-May-2011
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from Pen&Ink
Hello Dklrdmcches,
This poem definitely reminds me of one of those foggy nightmares which seem to vanish upon awakening. You capture the fear, dread, and hopelessness very well.
Favorite verse:
Kicking the playing cards into the furnace, laughter is cold and relentless.
Controlled by the strings of the patriarch of loathing,
I settle not for greatness, but for the chance to slip on through.
Lounging in the graveyard of those gone by, I part the sea of thorns
Well done.
Ray
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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Hello Dklrdmcches,
This poem definitely reminds me of one of those foggy nightmares which seem to vanish upon awakening. You capture the fear, dread, and hopelessness very well.
Favorite verse:
Kicking the playing cards into the furnace, laughter is cold and relentless.
Controlled by the strings of the patriarch of loathing,
I settle not for greatness, but for the chance to slip on through.
Lounging in the graveyard of those gone by, I part the sea of thorns
Well done.
Ray
Comment Written 13-May-2011
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from pickthorn
A very dark and mournful offering told in a somewhat offbeat cadence that brings a picture of mental torment to mind. Interesting piece.
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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A very dark and mournful offering told in a somewhat offbeat cadence that brings a picture of mental torment to mind. Interesting piece.
Comment Written 13-May-2011
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from adewpearl
Very powerful presentation
crimson tear - great visual that contributes to the dark mood of your poem
taste of a virgin touch - effective alliteration and intense emotional appeal
cold laughter, path of hurt - so many of your phrases contribute to the deep pain expressed in this poem Brooke
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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Very powerful presentation
crimson tear - great visual that contributes to the dark mood of your poem
taste of a virgin touch - effective alliteration and intense emotional appeal
cold laughter, path of hurt - so many of your phrases contribute to the deep pain expressed in this poem Brooke
Comment Written 13-May-2011
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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WOW! Thank you so very much for these kind words...dark lord
Comment from dtimes3
Ah, broken dreams always seem to open the door to darkness. But, you have taken us through that door and we have managed to get out alive - barely.
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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Ah, broken dreams always seem to open the door to darkness. But, you have taken us through that door and we have managed to get out alive - barely.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 13-May-2011
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from Espresso momma
An interesting poem of broken dreams and sadness. I do hope this is for the sake of poetry and not for real. If it is real, open the curtains, let the sun in and look up,...Thanks for a good write. You are good with the descriptions.
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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An interesting poem of broken dreams and sadness. I do hope this is for the sake of poetry and not for real. If it is real, open the curtains, let the sun in and look up,...Thanks for a good write. You are good with the descriptions.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from Kingsland
You have some very descriptive poetic language in this poem. I enjoyed reading this piece as it tells it tale in an excellent poetic thought structure. This was just a delightful piece of poetic art to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 12-May-2011
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You have some very descriptive poetic language in this poem. I enjoyed reading this piece as it tells it tale in an excellent poetic thought structure. This was just a delightful piece of poetic art to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 12-May-2011
reply by the author on 12-May-2011
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Thank you my friend for stopping by and reviewing this piece. I had fun writing it and I am pleased you enjoyed it as well...dark lord
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
another of your dark
pieces, which are always
well written, and easy
to understand....
The shattered collection of broken dreams continues. - since your talking of a collection.. might I suggest...
the shattered collection of broken dreams grows... just a thought.
Margaret
reply by the author on 12-May-2011
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another of your dark
pieces, which are always
well written, and easy
to understand....
The shattered collection of broken dreams continues. - since your talking of a collection.. might I suggest...
the shattered collection of broken dreams grows... just a thought.
Margaret
Comment Written 12-May-2011
reply by the author on 12-May-2011
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As always, I love the support and suggestions that you give. I thank you for stopping by and reading my dark writes...dark lord
Comment from jadapenn
Oh, wow, this is indeed a dark gloomy one, Dark Lord. You send shivers down my back with the lack of hope for this soul who just wants to live in darkness.
Well penned and presented. luv jada
reply by the author on 12-May-2011
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Oh, wow, this is indeed a dark gloomy one, Dark Lord. You send shivers down my back with the lack of hope for this soul who just wants to live in darkness.
Well penned and presented. luv jada
Comment Written 12-May-2011
reply by the author on 12-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the continued support of my writing, it means the world to me...dark lord
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My pleasure. I always like reading your work. luv jada
