For the Birds
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Female Cardinal"Poems about those winged gifts from above.
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Comment from saoirse1458
I'm a bit confused--this was listed as General Fiction--but it reads like free-form poetry. As poetry it is right on and I would actually give it four stars. However, if it is fiction--even super super short flash fiction--it lacks conflict. So I wish I could be of more help.
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reply by the author on 13-May-2011
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I'm a bit confused--this was listed as General Fiction--but it reads like free-form poetry. As poetry it is right on and I would actually give it four stars. However, if it is fiction--even super super short flash fiction--it lacks conflict. So I wish I could be of more help.
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Comment Written 11-May-2011
reply by the author on 13-May-2011
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This is poetry not fiction. I do not know how to relist as poetry. Elaine
Comment from adewpearl
Cardinals have to be among the most gorgeous creatures on Earth
You convey so well your appreciation for this bird - I love how God's artistry radiates from the cardinal :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 08-May-2011
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Cardinals have to be among the most gorgeous creatures on Earth
You convey so well your appreciation for this bird - I love how God's artistry radiates from the cardinal :-) Brooke
Comment Written 08-May-2011
reply by the author on 08-May-2011
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Thanks for reading about thsi beautiful bird. Elaine
Comment from Keri353
Great Picture to go with your poem, it works really well. Poem has very nice flow making it easy to follow the thought to the end. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome back :)
reply by the author on 07-May-2011
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Great Picture to go with your poem, it works really well. Poem has very nice flow making it easy to follow the thought to the end. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome back :)
Comment Written 07-May-2011
reply by the author on 07-May-2011
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am so glad you enjoyed this poem about a lovely bird. Elaine
Comment from quashdog
They are pretty birds but my favorite bird would have to be the bald eagle, because it is majestic and a lethal predator. The bald eagle is a man's bird. It has cahones.
reply by the author on 07-May-2011
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They are pretty birds but my favorite bird would have to be the bald eagle, because it is majestic and a lethal predator. The bald eagle is a man's bird. It has cahones.
Comment Written 07-May-2011
reply by the author on 07-May-2011
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Bald Eagles are awesome, I get a thrill every time I see one. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Gungalo
She's a real beauty that's for sure, girl!!! Isn't it funny though how in nature, the males have the showiest colors? I do so love this write and ... how the heck did you get your write to be over there on the right of the picture? LOL.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2011
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She's a real beauty that's for sure, girl!!! Isn't it funny though how in nature, the males have the showiest colors? I do so love this write and ... how the heck did you get your write to be over there on the right of the picture? LOL.
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Comment Written 07-May-2011
reply by the author on 07-May-2011
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Thanks for a great review. I am having difficulty with centering the poetry for this book. I have no idea how the poem got to the right of the picture. Elaine
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LOL wish I did know how. I'd like to use that fomat sometimes and cannot!!!
