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Paranormal Adventures

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Case Studies of Hauntings

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Comment from The Stranger
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they are most certainly in for a ghost ride, if not a rollercoaster ride if the old man is possessed by the ghost of Charles Bellingham

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2011

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2011
    Hi, T.S. Oh, I have a few more surprises planned LOL. Thanks for checking in to read this latest chapter. I really appreciate your generous review and support. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
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"Jeez, that was creepy as hell," Emma said. "Did you notice how his lips twisted into that horrible smile? And that voice - human but also something else. Do you really think it's the ghost of Charles Bellingham using his body?"

When people are faced with the idea that there is more unseen than seen, another conversation takes place.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2011

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2011
    I, too, find it really fascinating how we communicate on simultaneous levels and not all of them obvious. I've spent quite a lot of time reading about the phenomenon of possession. It's usually the faces of the people that are most upsetting - hence my focus. Thank you, Andrea for taking to read the chapter. I much appreciate your generous review and time. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
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Very scary. Well written,good storyline,and interesting characters.The care-taker freaked me out.Exciting to see what they un-cover. Good writing.

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2011

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2011
    Hi, DD. Thanks for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you found it scary! LOL It's what I'm aiming for. Much appreciate your generous review and great comments. Take care, Bev
Comment from Gungalo
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Oh this is truly starting to get gooooood, girl!! Can't wait till the next chapter now to see what is going to happen. Freaky first start there at the cottage, I'd say!! Great descriptions of what took place there and the old man's part in it. Sigh, scary stuff eh?

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2011

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2011
    Hi, Gungalo. Thanks for sticking with me for this next chapter. I'm glad you found it spooky. Last time, someone said my chapter was a bit boring, so I was determined to make this a bit more 'freaky'. I love your reviews, sweet lady. They are always uplifting for me!!! Hugs, Bev
reply by Gungalo on 29-Apr-2011
    My pleasure you as I am enjoying the read. Not to worry about them. LOL.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2011
    Oh, it usually gets me moving, so it ain't all bad LOL. XXXX Bev
reply by Gungalo on 29-Apr-2011
    Okay you just never let it get you down, okay!!!!???
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2011
    'Kay honey bun!
reply by Gungalo on 29-Apr-2011
    MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ya know I love ya girl!!!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2011
    Love you more LOL. Have a great weekend!
reply by Gungalo on 29-Apr-2011
    You too sweet girl!!!!