Paranormal Adventures
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Comment from James Dooney
Gee whiz, you could almost say this exact story is going on in the world right now. We are just puppets with our strings being pulled by the masters. Great write up here !
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Gee whiz, you could almost say this exact story is going on in the world right now. We are just puppets with our strings being pulled by the masters. Great write up here !
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hi, James. Thanks so much for this insightful review. Much appreciated! :) Bev
Comment from irishauthorme
Wow, what an action chapter! The caretakers hostility was no doubt prompted by the spirit of Charles Bellingham. Although Porter thinks that the ghost protects him, obviously he is being used. The growling dog was a great addition, and added to the tension.
This chapter moved very fast, and I loved that last line!
irish
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Wow, what an action chapter! The caretakers hostility was no doubt prompted by the spirit of Charles Bellingham. Although Porter thinks that the ghost protects him, obviously he is being used. The growling dog was a great addition, and added to the tension.
This chapter moved very fast, and I loved that last line!
irish
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, Irish. I really appreciate your support for this chapter. Things will move pretty quickly in this novel. Partly due to the fact I wrote the bones of it some years ago and can now apply some better techniques. Love your review! xx Bev
Comment from Wendyanne
Wow what an exciting story so far. I love paranormal stories and I am eager to read more of this dark tale as soon as possible. Excellent!!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Wow what an exciting story so far. I love paranormal stories and I am eager to read more of this dark tale as soon as possible. Excellent!!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hi, Wendy. Thanks so much for this grand review! I so glad you liked the chapter and look forward to entertaining you with further ones. I most appreciate your support and generosity. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Adri7enne
"Jenkins Porter raised his eyes (.)stopping at"....I think you've got a period here, instead of a comma.
So the caretaker is possessed. By the murderer. Must be darned unpleasant to be invaded by such a dark force. It might be a scary thought if I weren't so pragmatic. I'm just going to let you entertain me. Fun, Bev.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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"Jenkins Porter raised his eyes (.)stopping at"....I think you've got a period here, instead of a comma.
So the caretaker is possessed. By the murderer. Must be darned unpleasant to be invaded by such a dark force. It might be a scary thought if I weren't so pragmatic. I'm just going to let you entertain me. Fun, Bev.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hi, Adrienne. Yes, it's a scary world I live in sometimes! Thanks so much for your very generous and encouraging review. And thanks for catching that spaggie! xx Bev
Comment from royowen
What a beautiful creepy story, it is most entertaining, fancy a strange voice coming out the mouth of the care taker! Evil manifestations in the form of talking through humans. Well written, I have been enjoying reading, the thing I like about FS is the different forms of stories, which I wouldn't normally read, so I'm broadening my literary horizons, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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What a beautiful creepy story, it is most entertaining, fancy a strange voice coming out the mouth of the care taker! Evil manifestations in the form of talking through humans. Well written, I have been enjoying reading, the thing I like about FS is the different forms of stories, which I wouldn't normally read, so I'm broadening my literary horizons, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hi, Roy. Thank you very much for this great review! I, especially, appreciate the insights of people who don't normally read this genre. It's a fresh perspective, and I find it very helpful.
Many thanks,
Bev
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You're most welcome, Bev. Roy,
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Well, it is heating up well. I figure the house will be creepy. Nice tou c h with the old hound dog.
This is gonna be a tough one to root out.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hi. Well, it is heating up well. I figure the house will be creepy. Nice tou c h with the old hound dog.
This is gonna be a tough one to root out.
padumachitta
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much for your generous review! :) Bev
Comment from Aussie
Er, "If it were up to me, you people wouldn't be allowed to SET FOOT inside the place.?" 'white ascot?' Please explain. Oooh, you have all of my attention with your paranormal story. We have seen it, felt it, and we are not safe unless we make it so. Love XX K.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Er, "If it were up to me, you people wouldn't be allowed to SET FOOT inside the place.?" 'white ascot?' Please explain. Oooh, you have all of my attention with your paranormal story. We have seen it, felt it, and we are not safe unless we make it so. Love XX K.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks so very much, Kay. Corrections made. I appreciate your eye for improving my chapter and, of course, your generosity and support. Hugs, Bev
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Aye, Aye, Captain! LOL :-) XX
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XXXOOO
Comment from CR Delport
Yip, that sure was freaky. Another great post that makes for a very interesting read.
"Why would you want the portrait of a brutal murderer in a prominent position in your house? --- Missing quotes
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Yip, that sure was freaky. Another great post that makes for a very interesting read.
"Why would you want the portrait of a brutal murderer in a prominent position in your house? --- Missing quotes
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, CR. Correction made - I appreciate the sharp eye!
:) Bev
Comment from Jay Squires
Hey, I thought I was reading my own chapter from Trining. I used the same picture.
This is building to what should be a dynamic series of chapters ahead. I love paranormal novels -- especially when so exquisitely written.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hey, I thought I was reading my own chapter from Trining. I used the same picture.
This is building to what should be a dynamic series of chapters ahead. I love paranormal novels -- especially when so exquisitely written.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Gosh, I didn't mean to use the same picture, Jay. Funny how you have these subliminal things going on. Anyway, thanks so much for the awesome review! :) Bev
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Hi Bev, I think it's going to be one hell of a ride just reading along as the chapters are posted! This promises to be an exciting read, a most unusual subject for me, but I'm enjoying it.
17 chapters from end... (") We've been hired to...
Giddy :)
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hi Bev, I think it's going to be one hell of a ride just reading along as the chapters are posted! This promises to be an exciting read, a most unusual subject for me, but I'm enjoying it.
17 chapters from end... (") We've been hired to...
Giddy :)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hi, Giddy. I sure appreciate your grand review. Thank you, also, for spotting that spag! Since this is not a normally interesting topic for you, I especially appreciate your support.
:) Bev
