Introduction
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Comment from Bellringer
Your essays are becoming increasingly clear which is evidence that you are considering your audience. Lennon's thoughts appear to mirror the Communist Manifesto: The oppressed people of the world will unite and take over. Property rights will be abolished, and everyone will work together for the common good. Eventually people will become so used to this way of life (the idea behind "the New Soviet Man" that was promised) that the governments erected to enforce it will become unnecessary. Based on what I have seen, Marxism has not worked. Throw in the secret police or KGB and one begins to wonder. Thus, you may need to address the Marxism perception in your essays. I do agree with Lennon when he said, "Love is the answer." Love is putting others before one's self (includes ego). Finally, in order for man to change, he has to take baby steps--learn to play nice, share wealth, volunteer, be more socially aware, and as the song goes, teach your children well (invest time with them and serve as examples unconditional love). Regards, Hector
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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Your essays are becoming increasingly clear which is evidence that you are considering your audience. Lennon's thoughts appear to mirror the Communist Manifesto: The oppressed people of the world will unite and take over. Property rights will be abolished, and everyone will work together for the common good. Eventually people will become so used to this way of life (the idea behind "the New Soviet Man" that was promised) that the governments erected to enforce it will become unnecessary. Based on what I have seen, Marxism has not worked. Throw in the secret police or KGB and one begins to wonder. Thus, you may need to address the Marxism perception in your essays. I do agree with Lennon when he said, "Love is the answer." Love is putting others before one's self (includes ego). Finally, in order for man to change, he has to take baby steps--learn to play nice, share wealth, volunteer, be more socially aware, and as the song goes, teach your children well (invest time with them and serve as examples unconditional love). Regards, Hector
Comment Written 25-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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My first chapter just posted. Thanks...John
Comment from juliaSjames
I have often wondered if human beings have misunderstood the ancient prophecies. What I am beginning to understand is that we are on the cusp of a new way of life. And that the death and disaster that we fear is the destruction of ego. Something that we truly can't imagine.
I find that there are a few areas in this compelling write that I would like you to rethink and perhaps edit.
One is the name you have given to your ego. It holds connotations ansd powerful vibrations. Have you been empowering ego by lavishing such attention on it?
Another is the listing of the various paths to enlightenment. As I read this paragraph, I felt your preference. I suggest that you either expand or eliminate this section. Certainly you should omit the sentence, "No opinions will be offered from my end." This immediately causes the reader to focus on forming opinions rather than on seeking mind expansion.
I suggest that you re-work the final paragraph. All observations are valid and helpful. Sensitivity to painful comments is something I understand. But my higher self smiles, knowing that my irritation is but an ego trip.
Have you read the latest post by Rama Devi, the Paradox of Hope and Spider web by Pearlecat? I believe that the light of synchrocity is already beginning to illuminate this site.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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I have often wondered if human beings have misunderstood the ancient prophecies. What I am beginning to understand is that we are on the cusp of a new way of life. And that the death and disaster that we fear is the destruction of ego. Something that we truly can't imagine.
I find that there are a few areas in this compelling write that I would like you to rethink and perhaps edit.
One is the name you have given to your ego. It holds connotations ansd powerful vibrations. Have you been empowering ego by lavishing such attention on it?
Another is the listing of the various paths to enlightenment. As I read this paragraph, I felt your preference. I suggest that you either expand or eliminate this section. Certainly you should omit the sentence, "No opinions will be offered from my end." This immediately causes the reader to focus on forming opinions rather than on seeking mind expansion.
I suggest that you re-work the final paragraph. All observations are valid and helpful. Sensitivity to painful comments is something I understand. But my higher self smiles, knowing that my irritation is but an ego trip.
Have you read the latest post by Rama Devi, the Paradox of Hope and Spider web by Pearlecat? I believe that the light of synchrocity is already beginning to illuminate this site.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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My first chapter just posted. Thanks...John
Comment from shirley31
extaordinary work! i love your message and will be watching and reading more with pleasure! thought provoking powerful and much enjoyed this!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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extaordinary work! i love your message and will be watching and reading more with pleasure! thought provoking powerful and much enjoyed this!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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I should have Self evaluation chapter ready soon. Thanks for the vote of confidence...John
Comment from l.raven
Very well written,and very well said.My friends tell me all the time I judge everything with common sence.But I don't know it any other way.And I love the song Imagine.I think sometimes people listen to music,but they don't hear the words.Very good read.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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Very well written,and very well said.My friends tell me all the time I judge everything with common sence.But I don't know it any other way.And I love the song Imagine.I think sometimes people listen to music,but they don't hear the words.Very good read.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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I should have Self evaluation chapter ready soon. Thanks for the vote of confidence...John
Comment from adewpearl
My question to myself was, "How do I use... - add the comma
how we use our mind - our minds
John Lennon removed all lies from his life - I love his song too, but to jump from his lyrics to that kind of assumption about his life seems a stretch.
A good intro - it lays out what you plan to explore and keeps the reader interested. Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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My question to myself was, "How do I use... - add the comma
how we use our mind - our minds
John Lennon removed all lies from his life - I love his song too, but to jump from his lyrics to that kind of assumption about his life seems a stretch.
A good intro - it lays out what you plan to explore and keeps the reader interested. Brooke
Comment Written 25-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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Thanks so much...More to come...John
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
Five star's for the writing,of your thought's on the subject.You are obviously a good communicator,and so a good writer.[I see the first necessary,to becoming the second] I can not join in this journey,and must tell you up front. I am one of those Jesus freak's,what many call a closed mind.I consider myself to have found my truth,and at most times having a 'peak experience' with Him.The bible tell's the believer that,'We have the mind of Christ'. We need only access that state of 'being',by fellowship with Him. I don't wish to be a point of disagreement,in your voyage.So I will drop out. Thanks.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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Five star's for the writing,of your thought's on the subject.You are obviously a good communicator,and so a good writer.[I see the first necessary,to becoming the second] I can not join in this journey,and must tell you up front. I am one of those Jesus freak's,what many call a closed mind.I consider myself to have found my truth,and at most times having a 'peak experience' with Him.The bible tell's the believer that,'We have the mind of Christ'. We need only access that state of 'being',by fellowship with Him. I don't wish to be a point of disagreement,in your voyage.So I will drop out. Thanks.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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I do not disagree with Jesus' being our spiritual leader. I do disagree with how the bible is interpreted by many...More to come...John
Comment from jadapenn
Hi John, I came to examine your writing. Your words conjure up much intrigue and I'm interested in your thoughts and perceptions. We all have inherent beliefs and I am not one to be easily swayed with human instigated beliefs. Rather, I prefer to study and evaluate other thoughts on this human race.
I found your introduction very interesting and want to peek at more of these thoughts. luv jada
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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Hi John, I came to examine your writing. Your words conjure up much intrigue and I'm interested in your thoughts and perceptions. We all have inherent beliefs and I am not one to be easily swayed with human instigated beliefs. Rather, I prefer to study and evaluate other thoughts on this human race.
I found your introduction very interesting and want to peek at more of these thoughts. luv jada
Comment Written 25-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2011
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I hope you will help improve my words as much as possible...John
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I haven't done much editing on article-type writings, but will do my best. To my mind writers should use words and sentences that the ordinary man can easily interpret. Some struggle to make sense. Just a comment on general writing. lol. Have a great day. I have someone working on the poem I've just posted. Geez, it's hard in poetry land. lol. luv jada
Comment from Chris Tee
Well don!!
This was a very good read and tucked my in.
I enjoyed it so much
I hop;e the book will follow to be just as good as this prologue.
Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2011
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Well don!!
This was a very good read and tucked my in.
I enjoyed it so much
I hop;e the book will follow to be just as good as this prologue.
Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2011
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Keep reading...John
Comment from Majicman
I love John Lennon's song, it talks about the ideal world, and I feel it is possible if we, as a society, can overcome our ego to allow past 'conditionings' to dissolve and allow new paradigms to emerge. I certainly feel you have touched upon the 'inner' knowledge and I look forward to reading all about it.
I love your quote, "What's the difference between Ignorance and Apathy?" "I don't know and I don't care!" Many people in our society lives by it. They just want to watch TV and drink beer.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2011
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I love John Lennon's song, it talks about the ideal world, and I feel it is possible if we, as a society, can overcome our ego to allow past 'conditionings' to dissolve and allow new paradigms to emerge. I certainly feel you have touched upon the 'inner' knowledge and I look forward to reading all about it.
I love your quote, "What's the difference between Ignorance and Apathy?" "I don't know and I don't care!" Many people in our society lives by it. They just want to watch TV and drink beer.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2011
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I am having a bit of a problem choosing the sequence of my messages, but I will issue the first chapter soon...John
