Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Part three Chapter two"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, this is a god chapter. I agree about that this fiction is very close, unfortunately, to real life. I don't personally know anyone this abused, but do know of some that have been emotionally abused a lot. Thanks for sharing your talent, as always, with us, and continue to get better.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Barbara, this is a god chapter. I agree about that this fiction is very close, unfortunately, to real life. I don't personally know anyone this abused, but do know of some that have been emotionally abused a lot. Thanks for sharing your talent, as always, with us, and continue to get better.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This was a good read from beginning to end, as usual. I can't wait to see what happens next. I was glad to read that treatment is ongoing but not to many side effects.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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This was a good read from beginning to end, as usual. I can't wait to see what happens next. I was glad to read that treatment is ongoing but not to many side effects.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi, this was a nice chapter. I enjoyed the inner conflict which Troy felt. He was brave to go to that house. A person never knows when a man like that can do you an injur.
I liked the pace. luv jada
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Hi, this was a nice chapter. I enjoyed the inner conflict which Troy felt. He was brave to go to that house. A person never knows when a man like that can do you an injur.
I liked the pace. luv jada
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Writingfundimension
I think it was a wise choice to keep this chapter short. It really builds the suspense for the next installment. I agree with your notes. I have a niece living this nightmare right now and she just won't leave the marriage. So, I'm glad you're tackling this baffling and disappointing topic. Well done! Best wishes, Bev
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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I think it was a wise choice to keep this chapter short. It really builds the suspense for the next installment. I agree with your notes. I have a niece living this nightmare right now and she just won't leave the marriage. So, I'm glad you're tackling this baffling and disappointing topic. Well done! Best wishes, Bev
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I will pray for your niece.
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Thank you for prayers, Barbara. I appreciate your thoughtfulness! Bev
Comment from Chris Tee
I have not missed a chapter and this is another good write.
Exceptional to say the least!!
This words expressed perfectly.
It is a well written piece
Thank you for sharing this with us
Well done!!
I hope you will be better soon.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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I have not missed a chapter and this is another good write.
Exceptional to say the least!!
This words expressed perfectly.
It is a well written piece
Thank you for sharing this with us
Well done!!
I hope you will be better soon.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Scornwell
I thought this was as well written as usual. The characters, emotions, and scenes all come across well. What little dialog there was sounded realistic and appropriate for the characters. Troy is a brave man, many people are reluctant to come between a man and his wife, even when it is obvious that intervention is needed.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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I thought this was as well written as usual. The characters, emotions, and scenes all come across well. What little dialog there was sounded realistic and appropriate for the characters. Troy is a brave man, many people are reluctant to come between a man and his wife, even when it is obvious that intervention is needed.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
My dear friend, just do what you can do and no more. This is another great chapter, I'm sure Anna will wake up soon and will escapes the grip of this abusive man. Its a good read, the characters are so real.
Glad to know radiation isn't as bad as chemo...
God bless you Barbara.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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My dear friend, just do what you can do and no more. This is another great chapter, I'm sure Anna will wake up soon and will escapes the grip of this abusive man. Its a good read, the characters are so real.
Glad to know radiation isn't as bad as chemo...
God bless you Barbara.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Your short post allows a glimpse into the thoughts of someone who wants to help in this situation, but is afraid of making things worse. I'm not sure how the story will continue, but it is possible that this kind of impromptu intervention may create a more difficult situation.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Your short post allows a glimpse into the thoughts of someone who wants to help in this situation, but is afraid of making things worse. I'm not sure how the story will continue, but it is possible that this kind of impromptu intervention may create a more difficult situation.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Belinda
H, Barbara, of course the category is fiction... :) Actually I'm hoping this kind of thing never happens in real life. This is short and indeed necessary, don't worry. (I'm glad you're better).
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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H, Barbara, of course the category is fiction... :) Actually I'm hoping this kind of thing never happens in real life. This is short and indeed necessary, don't worry. (I'm glad you're better).
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Yes, it's fiction but does happen in real life and often. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from R. K. Alan
Your author's notes are so sad, but true. Women and some men go through attack after attack without a guardian angel to help them. Loved your story and glad Troy is stepping up. Ray aka R. K. Alan
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Your author's notes are so sad, but true. Women and some men go through attack after attack without a guardian angel to help them. Loved your story and glad Troy is stepping up. Ray aka R. K. Alan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
