Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Part three Chapter two"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Paradox Tremors
My prayers are always with you and my hope is everything will turn out alright in the end. Anyway, this is a nice little chapter. I hope Troy can save her before she gets seriously injured or killed. Keep up the good writing my friend.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2011
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My prayers are always with you and my hope is everything will turn out alright in the end. Anyway, this is a nice little chapter. I hope Troy can save her before she gets seriously injured or killed. Keep up the good writing my friend.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Chuck23
Wow. I was expecting something romantic -
I really did enjoy your writing. I appreciate your notes at the start of the chapter, because I was not up to date on the previous ones. I admire your style!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2011
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Wow. I was expecting something romantic -
I really did enjoy your writing. I appreciate your notes at the start of the chapter, because I was not up to date on the previous ones. I admire your style!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from misscookie
Your right many women are going through what your writing about and I applauded you for letting them no you mean not to take this serious matter lightly. This is a good write.
I'm please to hear no news...... Is good news, praise God.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2011
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Your right many women are going through what your writing about and I applauded you for letting them no you mean not to take this serious matter lightly. This is a good write.
I'm please to hear no news...... Is good news, praise God.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and understanding.
Comment from lisasolorio1
I myself have been in an abusive relationship and your right, it is not to be taken lightly. This is the first type reading part of your story will back track and check out more. Good job so far. ;)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2011
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I myself have been in an abusive relationship and your right, it is not to be taken lightly. This is the first type reading part of your story will back track and check out more. Good job so far. ;)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2011
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Thank you for kind review and kind words.
Comment from bhogg
The short nature made sense based on your last post. It certainly set's up the next one. I will of course be waiting. This is a good write. You are right about this type of abuse not really fictional, but occurs every day. Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2011
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The short nature made sense based on your last post. It certainly set's up the next one. I will of course be waiting. This is a good write. You are right about this type of abuse not really fictional, but occurs every day. Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 13-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I actually received a four because it was too short. I never knew you could get a 4 for havign too short of a post.
Comment from Cogitator
That surely picks up the suspense. You can be certain I will check out this story. Short, but effective in grabbing my attention...John
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2011
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That surely picks up the suspense. You can be certain I will check out this story. Short, but effective in grabbing my attention...John
Comment Written 13-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind reviw.
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My pleasure
Comment from Tellis
In a way I'm disappointed he didn't break the door down, but I also think it's better to get the police involved. i hope that creep gets what's coming to him. Great chapter and I don't mind the short posts.
Tellis
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2011
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In a way I'm disappointed he didn't break the door down, but I also think it's better to get the police involved. i hope that creep gets what's coming to him. Great chapter and I don't mind the short posts.
Tellis
Comment Written 13-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2011
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Troy is smart enough to know he can't get too involved. He will only make things worse for Anna. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
will Troy have acted quickly enough to save anna, we shall only find out a the next installment as this has been let as a cliffhanger
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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will Troy have acted quickly enough to save anna, we shall only find out a the next installment as this has been let as a cliffhanger
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review,
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Very nicely written end to the chapter. I agree that although it is fiction, it is real in the lives of many women. Somewhere I heard the term 'faction' which is a combo of fact that is fictionalized. That is what I would call this. Glad you radiation is going well. Take care! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Very nicely written end to the chapter. I agree that although it is fiction, it is real in the lives of many women. Somewhere I heard the term 'faction' which is a combo of fact that is fictionalized. That is what I would call this. Glad you radiation is going well. Take care! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from acvguard11
great job..great job earning the recognition and all time best award...remember dont let others discourage you especially if you love to write...great job and keep writing
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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great job..great job earning the recognition and all time best award...remember dont let others discourage you especially if you love to write...great job and keep writing
Comment Written 12-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
