Man Woman
Enjoy our strengths17 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Cog, wow you have written a fantastic contender in this one. I love the way you describe your message and the author's notes to give up fears and enjoy life...no fears here ...lol...nice one. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2011
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Hi Cog, wow you have written a fantastic contender in this one. I love the way you describe your message and the author's notes to give up fears and enjoy life...no fears here ...lol...nice one. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 30-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2011
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Thanks...John
Comment from stephybs
This is a funny one! With true fact information on the brain. It's a very lovely and light hearted poem that is very well put together. Stephy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2011
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This is a funny one! With true fact information on the brain. It's a very lovely and light hearted poem that is very well put together. Stephy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2011
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Many thanks...John
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi John,
You have done a good job of writing about the difference between men and women. Thank heavens we are different as it would be a bore if we weren't! I love the picture you chose which serves to enhance your well chosen words. "true orgasm is impartial" so very true. Well done and good luck in the contest....chey
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Hi John,
You have done a good job of writing about the difference between men and women. Thank heavens we are different as it would be a bore if we weren't! I love the picture you chose which serves to enhance your well chosen words. "true orgasm is impartial" so very true. Well done and good luck in the contest....chey
Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Many thanks...John
Comment from el twelve
that was very romantic, cute, well written, the picture complimentary. the information was interesting. it all flowed smoothly for easy reading
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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that was very romantic, cute, well written, the picture complimentary. the information was interesting. it all flowed smoothly for easy reading
Comment Written 28-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Continual and eternal thanks for your communication...John
Comment from Linda England Bonam
This was a good piece and fun to read. I really liked it!
I loved the picture you chose to go with this, too. That
was great!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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This was a good piece and fun to read. I really liked it!
I loved the picture you chose to go with this, too. That
was great!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Continual and eternal thanks for your communication...John
Comment from WRITER1
We do always seem to be miss matched. Yet in all our errors and undertakings we do still manage to love either a man or a woman and somehow it is just right.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011
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We do always seem to be miss matched. Yet in all our errors and undertakings we do still manage to love either a man or a woman and somehow it is just right.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011
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Love is cool!. Thanks for for words...John
Comment from SUSKI
This is very creative (ha,ha) and a unique way to go. Your rhymes are neat, nothing contrived. Seems like your writing just comes naturally. Great picture.
SUSKI
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011
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This is very creative (ha,ha) and a unique way to go. Your rhymes are neat, nothing contrived. Seems like your writing just comes naturally. Great picture.
SUSKI
Comment Written 28-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011
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You do me honor. Thanks so much...John
Comment from MizKat
Your poem is lovely and written well. It tells a nice poetic story. Still, it seems to tell more about the likenesses of men and women instead of the differences.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2011
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Your poem is lovely and written well. It tells a nice poetic story. Still, it seems to tell more about the likenesses of men and women instead of the differences.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2011
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Never did I think I would become addicted to anything. Ha! Ha! Ha! Nothing is better than connecting thoughts among kindred spirits....John
Comment from size17
Pretty straightforward here. I like the style you have and the structure you used.
I think you're missing a word in the third line. 'Is there question that..."
I also learned something new, so thank for that!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2011
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Pretty straightforward here. I like the style you have and the structure you used.
I think you're missing a word in the third line. 'Is there question that..."
I also learned something new, so thank for that!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2011
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Never did I think I would become addicted to anything. Ha! Ha! Ha! Nothing is better than connecting thoughts among kindred spirits....John
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this poem about men and women and what makes it work, i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2011
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this poem about men and women and what makes it work, i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 27-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2011
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Never did I think I would become addicted to anything. Ha! Ha! Ha! Nothing is better than connecting thoughts among kindred spirits....John
