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Dear Lexi

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"Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hi Jan,
Your poem is precious and I can see who Lexi
loves, her grand ma. My grandchildren are all grown and in college
I guess I will have to wait for great grand children
Smiles

Gert

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2011
    yes, Lexi and I are a team, for sure, Gert. My best friend has a great-granddaughter who will be 6 soon. The two of them are just great together. love, jan
Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Jan. What a wonderful poem about your Lexi. We have six grandkids now and each of them is so precious to us. I can easily understand this poem.. Good job. Bob

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 22-May-2011
    I am so sorry this is late -- thanks for reading, love, jan
Comment from Showboat
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Hi Jan,

Hope Lexi's all better now.

I remember when Shane was little. Treasure these moments, my dear friend, they fly by and soon they're getting married and having children of their own. No more than a blink!

Hugs,
Gayle

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 22-May-2011
    I am so sorry this is late -- thanks for reading, love, jan
Comment from ameen786
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Wow! Wonderful compliments for grandchildren, as a grandfather I can relate to your beautiful, meaningful poem, very sweet. Thanks and God bless you and your family.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 22-May-2011
    I am so sorry this is late -- thanks for reading, love, jan
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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This I can really relate
to, Jan - grandchildren
are such a precious gifts
and do bring such joy - I
love this and the picture

Margaret

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
    thanks, Margaret -- she is pure joy indeed -- love, jan
Comment from mumsyone
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I love your poem; thoughts any mother/grandmother can relate to. The only thing I would change is the 'while' to 'when' to make the whole thing more consistent.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
    good idea, I thought about that last night then didn't act on it -- love , jan
Comment from c_lucas
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Young children have a special way of weaseling into ones heart. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
    thanks, charlie -- love, jan
reply by c_lucas on 26-Feb-2011
    You're welcome, Jan. Charlie
Comment from happy to be here
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This is a lovely little verse that touches the reader with its gentleness and sincerity.
We see the depth of your relationship and are left feeling a little envious perhaps.
Well Done.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
    I'm happy to be here, too! thanks. love, jan
Comment from Paradox Tremors
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That is so sweet and special. I hope your granddaughter recovers quickly and spoil just as bad as she does her Nanny. Enjoyed the read and love I felt from your words.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
    thanks, Paradox Tremors -- long time, no hear from -- love, jan
Comment from samsaysagain
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Excellent, What a treasure you have in this little one!
Your words wrap your obvious love for and devotion to her like a warm, fuzzy protective blanket. There's nothing like being a grandparent! Well done and the picture has to make the reader smile! I remember the times the hose was the best water fountain! Thanks for giving us a smile. :):)

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
    yes, we have3 well water and I still believe the hose to be the best water fountain -- love, jan
reply by samsaysagain on 26-Feb-2011
    Thanks again for writing this. Thanks for the reply.