Dreaming Of Disco
a poem about the disco years14 total reviews
Comment from Espresso momma
And those were the days weren't they? I wouldn't go back there, but the past at times was a great memory. Good luck on the contest. thanks
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2011
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And those were the days weren't they? I wouldn't go back there, but the past at times was a great memory. Good luck on the contest. thanks
Comment Written 24-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2011
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, Dreaming Of Disco. If I could take my knowledge of life with me, I'd go back in a heartbeat!
Have a great week!
Comment from l.raven
I love Disco.And I love to dance it.It's hard to find any good dancing spots anymore.Has a great flow to it.And a good rhythm and rhyme.picture perfect.I was actually a bouser in a Disco place years ago.Loved it.Lady bouncer
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2011
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I love Disco.And I love to dance it.It's hard to find any good dancing spots anymore.Has a great flow to it.And a good rhythm and rhyme.picture perfect.I was actually a bouser in a Disco place years ago.Loved it.Lady bouncer
Comment Written 24-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2011
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and critique my poem, Dreaming Of Disco.
Have a great week!
Comment from Terry wrote
You certainly have captured the frenzied sights and motion of disco fever in this poem! Catch phrases from the time period, "dancin' queen ... disco inferno ... dancin' in the street ... you have caught the scene well. Thanks for the memories.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2011
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You certainly have captured the frenzied sights and motion of disco fever in this poem! Catch phrases from the time period, "dancin' queen ... disco inferno ... dancin' in the street ... you have caught the scene well. Thanks for the memories.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2011
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem, Dreaming Of Disco. During my misspent youth, I lived, not at a disco, but at a roller rink that turned itself into a roller-disco every Friday & Saturday night. That's probably why I can remember it - they didn't have a liquor license ... Loved the music & still do!
thanks again for reading!
Comment from missy98writer
Mystery Writer,
you poem is groovie and I can get down. Your rhymes are excellent. Your poem had a great title. I enjoyed the lines: "I love the nightlife And I don't want to let you go. Please hold me close and keep dancing I want to feel the music flow." Your disco poem is an excellent entry in the Disco Poetry writing prompt contest. I wish your good luck in the contest and voting booth. Thanks for sharing the fun. It was not jive turkey.
Missy.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2011
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Mystery Writer,
you poem is groovie and I can get down. Your rhymes are excellent. Your poem had a great title. I enjoyed the lines: "I love the nightlife And I don't want to let you go. Please hold me close and keep dancing I want to feel the music flow." Your disco poem is an excellent entry in the Disco Poetry writing prompt contest. I wish your good luck in the contest and voting booth. Thanks for sharing the fun. It was not jive turkey.
Missy.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2011
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Thanks, Missy, for taking the time to read & review my poem. I tried to use some lines from the songs of the day and still get the rhyme close. Hopefully I succeeded.
Glad you liked it!
