The Impudence of Oranges
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Comment from penelope
I think it's an excellent poem. I love that 'agate windchime tumbling about'. An example of your lovely descriptions. And the pictures you evoke with your words makes this a very deserving 'excellent'rating. I don't think I'd drop the kitchen part either.
Penelope
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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I think it's an excellent poem. I love that 'agate windchime tumbling about'. An example of your lovely descriptions. And the pictures you evoke with your words makes this a very deserving 'excellent'rating. I don't think I'd drop the kitchen part either.
Penelope
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you, Penelope. Happy writing :)
