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Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Harley, Simba and Leo PLAY"
...musings on the pets I've had

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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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I just love these stories!!! I often wonder what my animals are thinking and you have done such a great job of interpreting yours for all of us to enjoy! Great story. Debbie

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
    Thank you for reading the next installment of Harley's saga. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~
Comment from moyramouse
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What a lovely warm story. I think Harley and Guscott would be firm friends; they could swap stories about those dreadful cats! Simba must be huge, those paws could pack a punch if he swiped poor Harley... It's taken almost a year for Guscott and Perdita to become friends ( they still play the odd game) but now they sleep curled up together with dear old Thomas. Looking forward to the next post in this story. x moyramouse

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
    Thank you for continuing to read Harley's saga. Simba and Leo are getting used to Harley, but they will only play 'their' way. Harley has felt the wrath of Simba's huge paws. He just shakes it off and goes back at chasing the 'big fluffy thing.' You kind words and encouragement are greatly appreciated. ~patty~
Comment from bookishfabler
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I like how you really get into your pet's minds, what the see and hear.

Every day the Woman is giving the little dog more and more time to simply roam the house. I wouldn't capitalize Woman, because it's not a proper name, hence the 'the' in front of it.

As I read on, I see where you're going with it. Nevermind.

hugs book

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
    Thank you for continuing to read Harley's saga. Simba and Leo are getting used to Harley, but they will only play 'their' way. Harley has felt the wrath of Simba's huge paws. He just shakes it off and goes back at chasing the 'big fluffy thing.' You kind words and encouragement are greatly appreciated. ~patty~
Comment from RebelRose
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More adventures of Harley. I would say co-starring Simba and Leo but I believe Simba takes top-billing in this one. I guess he demanded equal time, huh?

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
    Thank you for continuing to read Harley's saga. Simba and Leo are getting used to Harley, but they will only play 'their' way. Harley has felt the wrath of Simba's huge paws. He just shakes it off and goes back at chasing the 'big fluffy thing.' Simba demanded this story be told from his POV - I think he wants his own saga, too. You kind words and encouragement are greatly appreciated. ~patty~