Another Pretty Face
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Comment from ejebb1951
I am happy, happy, happy about this almost ending story. Hoping Sara willnot make me join her in this story and marry Joe myself. About the chemo and all, girl, you've been in my prayers along and please know that you are covered by the blood of jesus by faith. Keep on trusting Him. Battle before Victory. Edie
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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I am happy, happy, happy about this almost ending story. Hoping Sara willnot make me join her in this story and marry Joe myself. About the chemo and all, girl, you've been in my prayers along and please know that you are covered by the blood of jesus by faith. Keep on trusting Him. Battle before Victory. Edie
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your prayers and kind review,
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My pleasure Barbara. Edie
Comment from Rama Rao
First, it's good to know you are making good progress with your therapy. Second, it is nice to see your post, which is exceedingly absorbing. The only pint is Sara is taking too long to answer the question and thinking of minor details like underclothes to go with the wedding dress. Isn't it like putting the cart before the horse? Lastly Ginger, Moore and other characters of the novel popped out of nowhere in the scene. To put it the other way, their introduction in the scene was rather sudden. You may look into it.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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First, it's good to know you are making good progress with your therapy. Second, it is nice to see your post, which is exceedingly absorbing. The only pint is Sara is taking too long to answer the question and thinking of minor details like underclothes to go with the wedding dress. Isn't it like putting the cart before the horse? Lastly Ginger, Moore and other characters of the novel popped out of nowhere in the scene. To put it the other way, their introduction in the scene was rather sudden. You may look into it.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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I wanted Ginger to pop in and pop out. I had introduced her in the beginning and all she needed to was to get another dig at Sara and she did, just that. I appreciate you kind review.
Comment from Allezw2
Lady BW,
I will say that at the rate you must be reviewing, I would say you are supporting your friends quite well.
Felicitations.
Nothing like a lady who is torn in too many ways and an author who can describe it so well.
If Cassie, doesn't, will you conjure up someone to hit Sara a good one up the side of her indecisive head?
Nicely done,
Fantasist
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Lady BW,
I will say that at the rate you must be reviewing, I would say you are supporting your friends quite well.
Felicitations.
Nothing like a lady who is torn in too many ways and an author who can describe it so well.
If Cassie, doesn't, will you conjure up someone to hit Sara a good one up the side of her indecisive head?
Nicely done,
Fantasist
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from dmjones
Hi Barbara, Joe is so romantic to do all this (with help of course)without Sara knowing. I didn't see any spag or nits or anything I would change. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Hi Barbara, Joe is so romantic to do all this (with help of course)without Sara knowing. I didn't see any spag or nits or anything I would change. Excellent work.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from rkstata
Wow! I was not expecting that until right before it! Can't wait to read more, though it is sad that it is coming to an end. Keep writing, and good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Wow! I was not expecting that until right before it! Can't wait to read more, though it is sad that it is coming to an end. Keep writing, and good luck!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Connie P
I'm so excited!!! As you said, I'm sure she won't make it easy but I think he's worn her down with his persistent reassurances. She's a lucky woman to find a man like Joe. I can't wait for the finale.
Connie
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I'm so excited!!! As you said, I'm sure she won't make it easy but I think he's worn her down with his persistent reassurances. She's a lucky woman to find a man like Joe. I can't wait for the finale.
Connie
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your support and the review. I appreciate both.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Excellent job. No typos. It all made sense. My only disappointment; Sara didn't say yes before you ended this. I'll be back!
Are the chicken cubes helping? Did you try the V8 fusion. I drank the peach It was easy on the tummy.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Excellent job. No typos. It all made sense. My only disappointment; Sara didn't say yes before you ended this. I'll be back!
Are the chicken cubes helping? Did you try the V8 fusion. I drank the peach It was easy on the tummy.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Yes, I tried all of it. Actually my hemogloblin went down to 9.0. The doc was discussing transfussions, but....they did additional tests and said my iron and B12 was adquate so they decided to let me know another week. We'll see what this week holds. Thank you for the kind review and support. I really am in need of the support, right now.
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I know. I had to go in Friday and spent 6 hours getting scans. Now I wait for test results. The folks around help us keep going. This will pass Barbara. Blessings.
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The waiting is really hard!!!!!!
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
Sara just needs to follow her heart and not be so suspicious of every thing! What a lovely word picture you gave me about the wedding, the dress, the flowers. I have a feeling Sara will say yes to Joe but your notes say she won't make it easy for him. Good Grief! Another well written chapter. I am glad you are half way done with your chemo and I hope the last half is easy for you. I still keep you in my prayers. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Hi Barbara,
Sara just needs to follow her heart and not be so suspicious of every thing! What a lovely word picture you gave me about the wedding, the dress, the flowers. I have a feeling Sara will say yes to Joe but your notes say she won't make it easy for him. Good Grief! Another well written chapter. I am glad you are half way done with your chemo and I hope the last half is easy for you. I still keep you in my prayers. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you fot your kind review and support.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara ...
I think I was just as surprised as Sara at the wonderful wedding preparations that Joe had organised for her. I really enjoyed this chapter and have given you 5 stars, knowing that you will consider the few changes recommended ....
* You have - Joe watched Sara finished eating. I suggest -
as Sara finished eating.
* You have - I haven't read newspaper ... and I suggest -
I haven't read the newspaper.
* You have - You're clothes were easy to pick ... this should be - Your clothes ...
It is good to know that you are progressing well with your chemo treatment and I marvel at your ability to keep posting chapters of your book when you feel so tired.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Hullo Barbara ...
I think I was just as surprised as Sara at the wonderful wedding preparations that Joe had organised for her. I really enjoyed this chapter and have given you 5 stars, knowing that you will consider the few changes recommended ....
* You have - Joe watched Sara finished eating. I suggest -
as Sara finished eating.
* You have - I haven't read newspaper ... and I suggest -
I haven't read the newspaper.
* You have - You're clothes were easy to pick ... this should be - Your clothes ...
It is good to know that you are progressing well with your chemo treatment and I marvel at your ability to keep posting chapters of your book when you feel so tired.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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But you found the mistakes my tireness caused me to make. I am happy your eagle eye caught them. I have made the corrections.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with your usual good form and good flow, a wonderful chapter and surprise that he set up the whole wedding. i will pray for your strength. pam
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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this is very well written with your usual good form and good flow, a wonderful chapter and surprise that he set up the whole wedding. i will pray for your strength. pam
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and prayers.
