Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Chapter 14; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from Shirley McLain
Sarah is beginning to bother me with all of her excuses. I am ready to read the next chapter. Good job.
I am sorry that the chemo has bothered you so much this week. You remain in my prayers.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Sarah is beginning to bother me with all of her excuses. I am ready to read the next chapter. Good job.
I am sorry that the chemo has bothered you so much this week. You remain in my prayers.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Hi Barbara! I didn't see any errors at all. This is one of the best love story I've read in FS... I think this is wonderful in many ways. The dialogue sounds natural and I like how they are talking out their problems.
We keep praying for you dear friend.
God bless you,
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Hi Barbara! I didn't see any errors at all. This is one of the best love story I've read in FS... I think this is wonderful in many ways. The dialogue sounds natural and I like how they are talking out their problems.
We keep praying for you dear friend.
God bless you,
Comment Written 18-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Joe and Sara are discussing their relationship. Sara seems concerned about his lifestyle. She doesn't think it's compatible with her lifestyle. He seems willing to compromise.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Joe and Sara are discussing their relationship. Sara seems concerned about his lifestyle. She doesn't think it's compatible with her lifestyle. He seems willing to compromise.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Connie C
While this is my first time reading part of your novel, I must say that this chapter really held my interest. (Or perhaps this is part two of a chapter.) The dialogue is excellent and now I feel the need to go back and read it all. This is very romantic. You are indeed a gifted writer. Connie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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While this is my first time reading part of your novel, I must say that this chapter really held my interest. (Or perhaps this is part two of a chapter.) The dialogue is excellent and now I feel the need to go back and read it all. This is very romantic. You are indeed a gifted writer. Connie
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dmjones
I didn't see any errors at all. I thought it was well written and a nice romance. The dialogue sounds natural and I like how they are talking out their problems.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I didn't see any errors at all. I thought it was well written and a nice romance. The dialogue sounds natural and I like how they are talking out their problems.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from bhogg
Chocolate strawberries were perfect. They look beautiful and taste good. In a way like your post which was written beautifully and left the reader with a good taste. I know your next book will be great, but this has been a great romance. Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Chocolate strawberries were perfect. They look beautiful and taste good. In a way like your post which was written beautifully and left the reader with a good taste. I know your next book will be great, but this has been a great romance. Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I am glad you liked it. I hope you like my next one. I haven't completely decided what I am going with. I may go out on limb and pray it works. Thank you for your review and encouragment.
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Barbara - whatever it is, I'll be there with you!
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You are so sweet.
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I'm not so sweet. I wish I could give you a big hug for enriching my life.
Comment from Writeaway...
Barbara, you never fail to disapoint me with your work, bravo once again. Your writing is always written to perfection and I can suggest nothing for improvement, excellent job, keep writing!! :)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Barbara, you never fail to disapoint me with your work, bravo once again. Your writing is always written to perfection and I can suggest nothing for improvement, excellent job, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging words.
Comment from fictionwriter
I hope Sarah decides to hang in there with Joe. I'd love to be a kept woman, but that's because I've had to work hard my whole life. Great job.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I hope Sarah decides to hang in there with Joe. I'd love to be a kept woman, but that's because I've had to work hard my whole life. Great job.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I agree. I would love to be a kept woman too. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, Don't you just want to look at Sara and just shake her and say, "Hey, girl, you've got it made now. Go for it!".... cute chapter in this wonderful story. Keep 'em coming!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Barbara, Don't you just want to look at Sara and just shake her and say, "Hey, girl, you've got it made now. Go for it!".... cute chapter in this wonderful story. Keep 'em coming!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Yes, I do, but I also understand her need not to make a mistake. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from harleyangelbrat
This chapter is very descriptive and expressive which makes for a great read. It really kept my interest and you brought your characters to life. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. I am still praying for you. I hope your Iron returns to normal. God bless you!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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This chapter is very descriptive and expressive which makes for a great read. It really kept my interest and you brought your characters to life. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. I am still praying for you. I hope your Iron returns to normal. God bless you!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and your prayers.
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You're very welcome. I hope you have a blessed day. Marilyn
