Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Chapter 14; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from KayteeF
Don't worry Barbara, I have not spotted any typos here.
Yep, chocolate covered strawberries are yummy and, in this case, so romantic.
I continue to enjoy this romance, but Sara must watch out and totally put Joe off with her worry about 'money and distance'.
Have you heard that Vitamin C helps in the absorption of Iron? You could maybe see what your doctor says, as there is the possibility that too much vitamin C can affect the bloods clotting factor and cause bleeding.
Hang in there dear friend. Cathleen
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Don't worry Barbara, I have not spotted any typos here.
Yep, chocolate covered strawberries are yummy and, in this case, so romantic.
I continue to enjoy this romance, but Sara must watch out and totally put Joe off with her worry about 'money and distance'.
Have you heard that Vitamin C helps in the absorption of Iron? You could maybe see what your doctor says, as there is the possibility that too much vitamin C can affect the bloods clotting factor and cause bleeding.
Hang in there dear friend. Cathleen
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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My doctor told me to take my iron pills with OJ to help absorb the iron. I am doing that. I have pumpkins seeds are high in iron and thyme, go figure.
Comment from marcellawachtel
He's a charmer, all right. I love how this romance is progressing. The dialog, as always, is terrific and he seems to be succeeding in breaking down her resistance.
I wish you strength to get through this until you emerge victorious. You WILL beat this.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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He's a charmer, all right. I love how this romance is progressing. The dialog, as always, is terrific and he seems to be succeeding in breaking down her resistance.
I wish you strength to get through this until you emerge victorious. You WILL beat this.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from minopavlic
Your selected artwork done me in, I now have a desperate craving. I am so glad to hear that your holding your own in your times of trial. I know many of us hold you up in our prayers.
Ms. Wilkey, as always your writing certainly in its framework of dialogue, characterization and the flow of the plot continues to blend nicely, and certainly adds in making one a part of the story.
May God continue to embrace you.
Mino
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Your selected artwork done me in, I now have a desperate craving. I am so glad to hear that your holding your own in your times of trial. I know many of us hold you up in our prayers.
Ms. Wilkey, as always your writing certainly in its framework of dialogue, characterization and the flow of the plot continues to blend nicely, and certainly adds in making one a part of the story.
May God continue to embrace you.
Mino
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your prayers and I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from boberto
I hope and pray you don't need a blood transfusion either.
I've needed them before and it really upset me---upset me because I didn't want my rich Italian blood to be polluted.
This Joe is becoming a wuss-and he sure makes a lot more money than I did as a Col. Different time.
Keep trucking, Babs.
A Team boberto
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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I hope and pray you don't need a blood transfusion either.
I've needed them before and it really upset me---upset me because I didn't want my rich Italian blood to be polluted.
This Joe is becoming a wuss-and he sure makes a lot more money than I did as a Col. Different time.
Keep trucking, Babs.
A Team boberto
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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He gets a large suppliment for working for working for the Task Force. It was explained much earlier. I don't think you were following then. I appreciate your support and kind review.
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I wasn't. Thank you. Lucky guy. I guess the other stuff I got in Nam and places was my supplement.
Take care,
boberto
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Nice flow of dialogue and great follow-up chapter, Barbara. I've never enjoyed chocolate with strawberries, myself. I prefer whipped cream. Lol! To each his own. Well done.
Isaiah
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Nice flow of dialogue and great follow-up chapter, Barbara. I've never enjoyed chocolate with strawberries, myself. I prefer whipped cream. Lol! To each his own. Well done.
Isaiah
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Whipped cream is good too. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from TLMcCallan
From what I could tell, the post seemed clean. I am an AVID romance reader/writer. As a result, I really enjoyed this post. I've only come into Chapter Fourteen but will backtrack and read the prior chapters! BTW, I hope the side effects from the chemo lessen soon and you begin feeling stronger. :)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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From what I could tell, the post seemed clean. I am an AVID romance reader/writer. As a result, I really enjoyed this post. I've only come into Chapter Fourteen but will backtrack and read the prior chapters! BTW, I hope the side effects from the chemo lessen soon and you begin feeling stronger. :)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your well wished and I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from joannesnow
Great chapter. Reads smoothly and the dialogue between Joe and Sara create a closeness of character to the reader. I also enjoy how we get to hear Sara's thoughts. This novel is commencing nicely. I loved the picture of chocolate covered strawberries, this symbolized sweetness in their relationship.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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Great chapter. Reads smoothly and the dialogue between Joe and Sara create a closeness of character to the reader. I also enjoy how we get to hear Sara's thoughts. This novel is commencing nicely. I loved the picture of chocolate covered strawberries, this symbolized sweetness in their relationship.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This was a good read from beginning to end, as usual. The chocolate covered strawberries and lobster were just right for this piece.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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This was a good read from beginning to end, as usual. The chocolate covered strawberries and lobster were just right for this piece.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from gerry26
This is a very good write. I am hoping that these guys finally get married. I loved the strawberry scene, I could see that scene in my mind. I really enjoy the flow and the strong characters.
I hope you are feeling better.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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This is a very good write. I am hoping that these guys finally get married. I loved the strawberry scene, I could see that scene in my mind. I really enjoy the flow and the strong characters.
I hope you are feeling better.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from mmmichelle34
That was a very nice peace of work you have a great way of writing and making someone see a picture as you read that was great work hope to see more...
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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That was a very nice peace of work you have a great way of writing and making someone see a picture as you read that was great work hope to see more...
Comment Written 19-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
