Reviews from

Dear Lexi

Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Lexi Sings"
"Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus

13 total reviews 
Comment from Janeyjane
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A very nice poem i enjoyed this one very much and i like the words that you have used to put
it together. The flow is good which makes it easy to read. Thanks for sharing !

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2011
    thank you, Janeyjane -- love, jan
Comment from Lady & Louis
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hey, I'm sure Mozart doesn't mind how she sings his song! :)

Sweet poem, dear Baroness, and the phonetic spelling works a treat.

Love,
Louise

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2011
    thanks, Louise -- Lexi is my heart, for sure -- love, jan
Comment from Gungalo
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Such a sweet
little Whitney
makes my heart
all a flutter
just to hear
all the beauty
one little princess can sing.

Love it you.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2011
    thanks, Gungalo -- she's my heart, for sure -- love, jan
Comment from c_lucas
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

The innoence of a young child will always bring a smile to someone's face. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2011
    thanks, again, Charlie -- she is my heart, for sure -- love, jan
reply by c_lucas on 17-Jan-2011
    You're welcome, Jan. Charlie
Comment from JeJo
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

hello jan,

this is a cute Whitney poem in good form about how little kids mispronounce words - it's just too adorable! and they would say 'wonduh' :) I hope Lexi will have a fun-filled birthday coming up - 2 years old? so is it mischievous time soon? lol! Her little voice, as you say in the AN, must bring 'music to lift heart and soul'

Great write... very enjoyable.. All the best, Jen

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    thanks, Jen -- no, the mischief began about two months ago -- she's a quick learner -- LOL. love, jan
reply by JeJo on 14-Jan-2011
    lol!
Comment from M. Karol
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

For a two year old , this is wonderful. I know and understand your joy her voice brings in your life. Have a great time with her and try to record this, she will love it when she grows up.
madhvi

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    great idea, thanks, madhi -- love, jan
Comment from mumsyone
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

There's nothing cuter or more endearing than the way children interpret and sing the songs they love. Thanks for sharing this one.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    you are welcome, mumsyone -- love, jan
Comment from whispersofthesoul
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

hiya this is so sweet. you reminded me of my niece who has her very own version

music to lift the heart and soul

you couldnt have put it any better.
you have put a smile on my face that i am sure it will stay with me for the rest of the day. thankyou kelly x

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    you are welcome, kelly -- love, jan
Comment from anabellapongasi
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Aww, how sweet and precious is this! Thanks for sharing this lovely little piece about how your granddaughter Lexi sings Twinkle Twinkle Little star. I can't wait to hear how my grandson sings! (he's only 3 weeks old:))
Anabella

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    will be a little while before he sings but it will get her quicker than you might think -- congratulations on becoming a grandmother, there is nothing like it -- love, jan
Comment from Dave Sargeant
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

It is so nice to capture the moment for both yourself and Lexi. She will treasure these writings long after you have gone, though probably not in her teenage years. Dave.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    yes, you are right, Dave -- love, jan