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Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Harley's First Christmas"
...musings on the pets I've had

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Comment from misscookie
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Love the picture I can seewhy there is so much love in your home. by looking at the happy faces of both.
I love this write and I feli as if I was there with you.
this is a good write.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's saga. Your generous review makes me smile. He is doing well, and we ALL had a wonderful Christmas. ~patty~
reply by misscookie on 14-Jan-2011
    Your welcome, take care.
reply by misscookie on 14-Jan-2011
    Your welcome, take care.
reply by misscookie on 14-Jan-2011
    Your welcome, take care.
Comment from marcellawachtel
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Adorable, well-told story, great detail, wonderful 'train of thought' from Harley. This is a story for children as well as for adults, and it is charmingly written.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's saga. Your generous review makes me smile. He is doing well, and we ALL had a wonderful Christmas. ~patty~
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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Hello Poet PAtty and hope you are enjoying your complete family. An interesting story, revealing the love, fun, warmth a family can enjoy together with their pets. Good to hear form you , have a great day. I enjoyed, LOyd

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's saga. Your generous review makes me smile. He is doing well, and we ALL had a wonderful Christmas. ~patty~
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 14-Jan-2011
    Great and you are welcome, Loyd
Comment from markk
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What a wonderful sounding Christmas and such a sweet piece you've written about your dog and household. Makes me feel like I know the little one. well done.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    Thank you for continuing to read Harley's saga. We ALL had a wonderful Christmas, and Harley is now a bonafide member of the family. Your generous review makes me smile. ~patty~
Comment from RKagan
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Awww Harley tugs at my heart. What a sweet little guy. Your cats are really good. My cat hates company. He should be socalized, I've always had people here, but he hates them anyway. lol. He doesn't do anything, he just hides. Great story. Love the Harley guy!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's saga. He is getting so big, so fast, and I have to admit - he is one spoiled dog! I'm glad you enjoyed his latest story. ~patty~
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Aww this was a really sweet story. Well thought out, entertaining and definitely a story full of laughter and great descriptive narrative. I love your Harley...giggles

xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    Thank you for continuing to follow Harley's saga. I'm glad you enjoyed this latest installment. ~patty~
Comment from Perp Ihebom
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This read more like a story than a poem, even though it was presented in a poetic format. The excitement in the narrator's voice is infectious. A real fun read. kudos

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    I'm not sure why this wanted to be a poem on the site. I posted it as "Add a Chapter" to my novel, so it was weird. However, it was just supposed to be another story in Harley's saga. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, i like your writing of Harley's first Christmas, did you get him a ornament for the tree? it sounds like he had a kicking good time. great job

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    Of course he got an ornament - They make them special - not hallmark, but a Petco special!! Thank you for following Harley's saga. ~patty~
Comment from Rachel Bailey
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Harley seems to be doing very well with his new family. I think he has already forgot his beginning family. I love reading animal stories. Have fun with Harley and keep us up to date on him.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's saga. He is doing very well - getting big, and keeping me laughing. Today, he went to Petco and got a training harness and leash - I can just see the fun now! ~patty~
reply by Rachel Bailey on 14-Jan-2011
    Ya I miss the puppy stages. Mine dog had surgery today. He is 14 and I have been trying to baby him all night, but he doesn't feel good. All of my animals are getting old except for the last two additions. We have a zoo, but my husband and I love them all.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
    I hope your dog feels better.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
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A very GOOD write with good flow,and was structured well with a descriptive story. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing with me.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011
    Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's saga. I'm glad you enjoyed this latest story. ~patty~