Pet Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Harley's First Christmas"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from acvguard11
great job..i really enjoyed reading this...dont let others discourage you if you love to write....remember do what you love and dont let others stop you....great job and keep writing :)!!!!!!
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great job..i really enjoyed reading this...dont let others discourage you if you love to write....remember do what you love and dont let others stop you....great job and keep writing :)!!!!!!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I greatly appreciate your comments. ~patty~
Comment from mumsyone
It was fun reading about Harley's first Christmas. We had a dachshund who absolutely loved Christmas and Easter. He opened presents for us and brought Easter eggs to us without breaking them.
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It was fun reading about Harley's first Christmas. We had a dachshund who absolutely loved Christmas and Easter. He opened presents for us and brought Easter eggs to us without breaking them.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Thank you for continuing to read Harley's saga. Somehow I think if he had opened any gifts this year, he would have eaten the paper, boxes, and maybe given us the gifts! ~patty~
Comment from juliaSjames
And a good time was had by all. You do a great job of passing on what Harley saw and did on his first Christmas in his new home. I agree that animals are social creatures. Any time visitors arrived, my cats would materialize to meet and greet, and then to take up strategic positions to listen to the conversation and absorb the atmosphere.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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And a good time was had by all. You do a great job of passing on what Harley saw and did on his first Christmas in his new home. I agree that animals are social creatures. Any time visitors arrived, my cats would materialize to meet and greet, and then to take up strategic positions to listen to the conversation and absorb the atmosphere.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Gotta love it when the cats come in to 'listen.' Simba is really into being social, but Leo is kind of scared to come out. Harley, on the other hand, is a social beast. He wants to be at the center of everything. Thank you for reading and the generous review. ~patty~
Comment from Patricia Forsythe
Hello Mustangpatty,
What a cute story depicting Harley's first Christmas.
As the little doggies and other have such good masters to take care of them they always appreciate their gifts, and mostly their love. This is a very happy story to read.
Thank you,
pat
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Hello Mustangpatty,
What a cute story depicting Harley's first Christmas.
As the little doggies and other have such good masters to take care of them they always appreciate their gifts, and mostly their love. This is a very happy story to read.
Thank you,
pat
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading Harley's saga. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I appreciate your generous review. ~patty~
Comment from Herb
Arrrrrr Bless. The inocence of the world through a dogs eyes. Great narritive voice throughout, sort of a limited third person narraitive. the language reflecting the feel of the dog. good job.
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Arrrrrr Bless. The inocence of the world through a dogs eyes. Great narritive voice throughout, sort of a limited third person narraitive. the language reflecting the feel of the dog. good job.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading Harley's story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your generous review is much appreciated. ~patty~
Comment from LadyCosgrove
This tale [tail] brought tears to my eyes. I am so pleased that Harley had such a wonderful Christmas.
The quality of writing brings the reader right into the room and bestows involvement. Well done. :o)
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This tale [tail] brought tears to my eyes. I am so pleased that Harley had such a wonderful Christmas.
The quality of writing brings the reader right into the room and bestows involvement. Well done. :o)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's saga. Your generous review makes me smile. ~patty~
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Patty,
How lovely to hear about Harley and his escapades. He sounds as though he is doing wonderfully well and is as cute as a button. A Jack Russle was designed to keep a person on their toes! ;-) Your did such a truly excellent job with this little story. It was entirely enjoyable. I'm looking forward to hearing more of this little fellows adventures. Hugs, W ^-^
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Hi Patty,
How lovely to hear about Harley and his escapades. He sounds as though he is doing wonderfully well and is as cute as a button. A Jack Russle was designed to keep a person on their toes! ;-) Your did such a truly excellent job with this little story. It was entirely enjoyable. I'm looking forward to hearing more of this little fellows adventures. Hugs, W ^-^
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's story. He does seem to be thriving, and he and I are having a good time. He is great company, and I can't wait until he has all of his shots, so we can start hanging out at the dog parks! ~patty~
Comment from Ms. Gray
I was drawn to your story by the title. I was afraid someone had named a baby Harley and I wanted to check it out. I'm glad the subject of your cute story turned out to be a little dog! He sounds like a lot of fun. Thank you for sharing the story of his first Christmas!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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I was drawn to your story by the title. I was afraid someone had named a baby Harley and I wanted to check it out. I'm glad the subject of your cute story turned out to be a little dog! He sounds like a lot of fun. Thank you for sharing the story of his first Christmas!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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LOL! Yeah, it would be mean to name a child Harley Davidson. This Jack Russell Terrier is the subject of my novel of his adventures and many of my poems. I'm glad you enjoyed, and I appreciate your generous review. ~patty~
Comment from Fireshadow
Hi, Patty, this is a wonderful account of Harley's first Christmas ! I'm sure he enjoyed all the excitement of new people, laughter and Mufasa. I think you mistakenly categorized this writing under the poetry section (vs. story). Great write, nonetheless.
Ama
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Hi, Patty, this is a wonderful account of Harley's first Christmas ! I'm sure he enjoyed all the excitement of new people, laughter and Mufasa. I think you mistakenly categorized this writing under the poetry section (vs. story). Great write, nonetheless.
Ama
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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I'm not sure what happened with the posting; I added a chapter to my novel, and it turned out to be poetry!! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate your generous review. ~patty~
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Patty,
This is such a delightful story about Harley's first Christmas. You descriptions are so vivid I felt as if I were a fly on the wall watching all the festivities. I think my little dog knows everything I say to her...if she wants to...if not she just turns her head away. Well written and enjoyable story....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Hi Patty,
This is such a delightful story about Harley's first Christmas. You descriptions are so vivid I felt as if I were a fly on the wall watching all the festivities. I think my little dog knows everything I say to her...if she wants to...if not she just turns her head away. Well written and enjoyable story....blessings, chey
Comment Written 14-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the latest of Harley's saga. Your remarks made me smile - you had exactly the reaction I was aiming for. ~patty~
