Pet Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "The Choka for Jack"...musings on the pets I've had
7 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
Hey you, this is great. A purrrrfect choka and one with tons of love in it. Awesome done for that cat named Jack, girl. Love this little write, that's not so little!!!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2011
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Hey you, this is great. A purrrrfect choka and one with tons of love in it. Awesome done for that cat named Jack, girl. Love this little write, that's not so little!!!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2011
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Jack was this incredibly beautiful and smart cat. My love for him knew no bounds as for a short period of time - he was everything to me. Thanks for reading some of my old stuff. ~patty~
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My pleasure you. I felt that in your poetry!!!
Comment from sweetsilversong
A beautiful choka dedicated to Jack, he seemed a lovely companion.
You write with such passion and your love for animals is evident.
Best wishes.
SSS
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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A beautiful choka dedicated to Jack, he seemed a lovely companion.
You write with such passion and your love for animals is evident.
Best wishes.
SSS
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. Jack was a pretty special cat. ~patty~
Comment from adewpearl
If I've heard of this form before, I've forgotten all about it. LOL I just love that you're willing to explore all these forms in your pet series, Patty.
Your poem is in perfect syllable form
I like your use of the wonderfully flowing Abyssinian
I also like the internal rhyme with on my own or all alone
And, of course, your expression of genuine emotion is most appreciated :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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If I've heard of this form before, I've forgotten all about it. LOL I just love that you're willing to explore all these forms in your pet series, Patty.
Your poem is in perfect syllable form
I like your use of the wonderfully flowing Abyssinian
I also like the internal rhyme with on my own or all alone
And, of course, your expression of genuine emotion is most appreciated :-) Brooke
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review, Brooke. This is a fun exercise on the days I can concentrate - but a CHORE when I can't. Thank you so much for your continuing support of my work and struggle to learn poetry. ~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Another enjoyable pet poem from Patty. I like the style of this poem. I am learning so much from your poetry adventure and writing down the structure of the poems so I can try them someday! Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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Another enjoyable pet poem from Patty. I like the style of this poem. I am learning so much from your poetry adventure and writing down the structure of the poems so I can try them someday! Debbie
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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Thank you for following my pets and the progress of the poetry trials. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. ~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
Pets are known for their healing power. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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Pets are known for their healing power. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and your generous review. ~patty~
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You're welcome, Patty. Charlie
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Patty:)
Once again, you have introduced me to another interesting form of poetry. this is a simple, easy to follow format, but I prefer the Japanese Haiku and Senryu.
I appreciate your continued efforts to present all forms of poetry as you learn how to write in each format. Thank you for sharing. I also like to meet your many pets.
Roger
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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Hi Patty:)
Once again, you have introduced me to another interesting form of poetry. this is a simple, easy to follow format, but I prefer the Japanese Haiku and Senryu.
I appreciate your continued efforts to present all forms of poetry as you learn how to write in each format. Thank you for sharing. I also like to meet your many pets.
Roger
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Learning all of the different forms of poetry is both a challenge and a joy. It is good to learn new things, and to s-t-r-e-t-ch those poetic muscles! Thanks for reading. ~patty~
Comment from CodyJack
I don't think I have heard of this form of poetry but it is very pretty. I like how you used it for the Cat, Jack. You have good imagery and are very creative with this. Keep it up. Your friend, Cody
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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I don't think I have heard of this form of poetry but it is very pretty. I like how you used it for the Cat, Jack. You have good imagery and are very creative with this. Keep it up. Your friend, Cody
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2011
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Thanks, Cody for reviewing my latest poem in the book. Jack was incredible. Thank you for your kind words. ~patty~
