Another Pretty Face
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Comment from adewpearl
Yay for the chemo going well, which is ever so more important than anything else, but this is a review, so I also should tell you that I like the dialogue in this chapter and the fact that Sara is doing better with all her doubts, though she is still not 100%. LOL At least now she is annoying me in a more manageable way. ;-) Brooke
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Yay for the chemo going well, which is ever so more important than anything else, but this is a review, so I also should tell you that I like the dialogue in this chapter and the fact that Sara is doing better with all her doubts, though she is still not 100%. LOL At least now she is annoying me in a more manageable way. ;-) Brooke
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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I hope Sara comes to her sensex. She had a lot of growing to do. Maybe with our help she'll make it. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from markk
Very well written peice and I'm enjoying the story. Thanks for sharing. Glad to see how this relationship is now developing and how Joe seems to care so much for Cassie. well done.
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Very well written peice and I'm enjoying the story. Thanks for sharing. Glad to see how this relationship is now developing and how Joe seems to care so much for Cassie. well done.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sweetsilversong
Barbara, this was a very enjoyable chapter, they are getting more interesting with each one, and it feels like something exciting is just around the corner.
Very well written.
Best wishes.
SSS
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Barbara, this was a very enjoyable chapter, they are getting more interesting with each one, and it feels like something exciting is just around the corner.
Very well written.
Best wishes.
SSS
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from marcellawachtel
Very good chapter. I really like what's happening now, and I'm looking forward to what happens next. There are subtle changes going on all over in this chapter.
Glad top hear that the second part of Chemo went OK. Hang in there. So many people are thinking of you.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Very good chapter. I really like what's happening now, and I'm looking forward to what happens next. There are subtle changes going on all over in this chapter.
Glad top hear that the second part of Chemo went OK. Hang in there. So many people are thinking of you.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. Yes, things are happening now and will be moving quickly.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
i am glad phase two is going well for you, i am going to miss this book when it ends. have you got a story written about one of the other members that you will be posting? i liked this chapter. you create exciting characters and dialogue
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i am glad phase two is going well for you, i am going to miss this book when it ends. have you got a story written about one of the other members that you will be posting? i liked this chapter. you create exciting characters and dialogue
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Yes, I do have a story written about one of the other Task Force members, but I am not sure I am ready to post it. I may go out on a limb and try to complete one that's not finished. I have three chapters about an abused wife trying to escape her situation. I might try to post it. I have never posted a book that wasn't finished. I am little scared.
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don't be. let it evolve with the suggestions that come to you and we can watch your book grow as you write it.
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I will probably go for it. It has a good start.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Great chapter and I am glad things seem to be working out for Joe and Sara now. I don't like unhappy endings. Great job as always.
won't be as na?ve when it comes
I am glad things are going well in your chemo. I will continue to keep you in my prayers. Best Wishes.
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Great chapter and I am glad things seem to be working out for Joe and Sara now. I don't like unhappy endings. Great job as always.
won't be as na?ve when it comes
I am glad things are going well in your chemo. I will continue to keep you in my prayers. Best Wishes.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your prayers. Evil Eddie got with maive and I knew he would, but forgot to change it before I posted. I have it corrected.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Seeing you had written more is great. Not only because I
love your story and look forward to reading the rest; it let's us know you are hanging in there. Blessings and strength be yours.
Below some oops.
"You've made you[your] point.
You were na?ve [naive] and an unscrupulous male took advantage of it."
"I plan on educating her, so she won't be as na?ve [naive] when it comes to males."
IN THE AUTHOR'S NOTE. could not resist the adorable
littl [e] duckling.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Seeing you had written more is great. Not only because I
love your story and look forward to reading the rest; it let's us know you are hanging in there. Blessings and strength be yours.
Below some oops.
"You've made you[your] point.
You were na?ve [naive] and an unscrupulous male took advantage of it."
"I plan on educating her, so she won't be as na?ve [naive] when it comes to males."
IN THE AUTHOR'S NOTE. could not resist the adorable
littl [e] duckling.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
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My computer always adds the accent to naive and I know Evil Eddie hates it. I forgot to change it before I posted. I will get on these errors ASAP. Thank you for your eagle eye.
Comment from JW
Hmm. As I sit here after reading the chapter, I really don't know what to say. It was great. Another excellent addition to your book. However, being the excellent author no doubt you are - you already know that. :-)
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Hmm. As I sit here after reading the chapter, I really don't know what to say. It was great. Another excellent addition to your book. However, being the excellent author no doubt you are - you already know that. :-)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
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I worry about every thing I write. I almost get afraid to click on post it. I am never sure how a post will be received. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Oh, I'm so glad Joe and Sara are
going to be all right - and perhaps,
in time, tie the knot.
You've made you(r) point
cheek with (h)is thumb
were na?ve naŻve - evil eddie's been at work.
be as na?ve - here again
Joe took her hand[,] as they walked - comma not needed.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Oh, I'm so glad Joe and Sara are
going to be all right - and perhaps,
in time, tie the knot.
You've made you(r) point
cheek with (h)is thumb
were na?ve naŻve - evil eddie's been at work.
be as na?ve - here again
Joe took her hand[,] as they walked - comma not needed.
Margaret.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your eagle eye. I hate it when I make stupid mistakes that I know better than. I wonder if I can blame it on chemo brain.
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I do private editing and never miss other's mistakes, but am always missing my own - M x
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I always make stupid errors. I read what I want it to say instead of what it really says.
Comment from lola29
It certainly seems that Joe and Sara are in love with each other, and it would nice to see them relax a bit and enjoy their time together, and you provided that in this excellent chapter.
(naive)
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It certainly seems that Joe and Sara are in love with each other, and it would nice to see them relax a bit and enjoy their time together, and you provided that in this excellent chapter.
(naive)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
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Evil Eddie did a number on naive. I will attempt to correct it.
