Another Pretty Face
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
So glad to hear your chemo is going well and you are feeling well enough to write. This chapter is well written and enjoyable. I love the artwork too! Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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So glad to hear your chemo is going well and you are feeling well enough to write. This chapter is well written and enjoyable. I love the artwork too! Debbie
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your encouragement.
Comment from dportwood
barbara,
This chapter is another one that is well written and interesting. I like it that Cassie didn't get hurt and is doing well. Perhaps Joe and Sara are on the road back to a relationship. Well done.
Duane
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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barbara,
This chapter is another one that is well written and interesting. I like it that Cassie didn't get hurt and is doing well. Perhaps Joe and Sara are on the road back to a relationship. Well done.
Duane
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I hope Joe and Sara work things out also.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Joe's yellow Porsche was my favorite description of your in chapter thirty-two because I'm a car person. You've written another excellent chapter, my friend. Your dialogue is spot on and your narrative is great. Joe is such a lovely man. Sara needs to get over her fears before I smack her. I'm pleased your chemo is doing fine. I pray for your swift recovery and to kick cancers dumb butt! I look forward to reading the last 50 pages. You need to write a sequel after this book is over.
Melissa.
glitter-graphics.com
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Barbara,
Joe's yellow Porsche was my favorite description of your in chapter thirty-two because I'm a car person. You've written another excellent chapter, my friend. Your dialogue is spot on and your narrative is great. Joe is such a lovely man. Sara needs to get over her fears before I smack her. I'm pleased your chemo is doing fine. I pray for your swift recovery and to kick cancers dumb butt! I look forward to reading the last 50 pages. You need to write a sequel after this book is over.
Melissa.
glitter-graphics.com
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Where I go next is up in the air, right now. I have a couple of options I am playing around with. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
In this chapter I get the distinct feeling that Sara and Joe are really all right. I hope she finds a way to trust him again...which I don't think she should have lost in the first place! Great dialogue (as usual) in this chapter and I enjoyed every written line. Well done and I hope you remain well despite the chemo. Blessings, chey
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Hi Barbara,
In this chapter I get the distinct feeling that Sara and Joe are really all right. I hope she finds a way to trust him again...which I don't think she should have lost in the first place! Great dialogue (as usual) in this chapter and I enjoyed every written line. Well done and I hope you remain well despite the chemo. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and well wishes.
Comment from RebelRose
Another great chapter. I'm still waiting for that happy ending that I know is well on its way. In the meantime, I will enjoy all the posts leading up to it. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Another great chapter. I'm still waiting for that happy ending that I know is well on its way. In the meantime, I will enjoy all the posts leading up to it. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bowls
The last 50 pages? Oh dear! I hope you have the sequel ready to start when this one's over. I'm so glad to hear you're progressing well. Your story is, too. I'm glad Sara and Joe are finally having some time to get together quietly and hopefully they'll be able to work things out. It's looking hopeful.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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The last 50 pages? Oh dear! I hope you have the sequel ready to start when this one's over. I'm so glad to hear you're progressing well. Your story is, too. I'm glad Sara and Joe are finally having some time to get together quietly and hopefully they'll be able to work things out. It's looking hopeful.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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I hope they work things out myself. We shall wait and see. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from joannesnow
Another well written easy to interpret chapter. Your use of dialogue continues to bring your characters to life. You have a unique way of describing their actions that allows the reader to almost visualize these movements. I'm becoming quite fond of Joe.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Another well written easy to interpret chapter. Your use of dialogue continues to bring your characters to life. You have a unique way of describing their actions that allows the reader to almost visualize these movements. I'm becoming quite fond of Joe.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Writeaway...
Barbara, once again you have blown me away with your writing skills, bravo. You add lengthy descriptions which is what a good story needs and the dialogue is to perfection, I can suggest nothing for improvment, excellent job, keep writing!! :)
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Barbara, once again you have blown me away with your writing skills, bravo. You add lengthy descriptions which is what a good story needs and the dialogue is to perfection, I can suggest nothing for improvment, excellent job, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Connie P
If Sara's asking if they're all right, then my guess is that they're all right. I enjoyed this chapter, they're trying to find that special place that attracted them in the first place.
Connie
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If Sara's asking if they're all right, then my guess is that they're all right. I enjoyed this chapter, they're trying to find that special place that attracted them in the first place.
Connie
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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I have hopes they will work things out. Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Looks like Sara is seeing some sense at last and letting her true instincts instead of her fears guide her. Good chapter, nicely written.
Patrick
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Hi Barbara,
Looks like Sara is seeing some sense at last and letting her true instincts instead of her fears guide her. Good chapter, nicely written.
Patrick
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2011
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Thank you Patrick, for your kind review.
