Another Pretty Face
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Comment from KayteeF
Hi Barbara. Sorry I have been a bit quiet lately, but I am gradually and slowly pacing myself to catch up with all my friends, and the wonderful works that I have been missing.
Glad to see that Cassie appears to have recovered safely from her captivity and you are able to work on the romantic side of things.
Sara sounds like she might take some persuading that Joe really loves her, though really she should be assured that he has her bests interests at heart.
I am glad to hear that you are coping with further chemo. God be with you.
Regards, Cathleen
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Hi Barbara. Sorry I have been a bit quiet lately, but I am gradually and slowly pacing myself to catch up with all my friends, and the wonderful works that I have been missing.
Glad to see that Cassie appears to have recovered safely from her captivity and you are able to work on the romantic side of things.
Sara sounds like she might take some persuading that Joe really loves her, though really she should be assured that he has her bests interests at heart.
I am glad to hear that you are coping with further chemo. God be with you.
Regards, Cathleen
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Thnk you for reading and reviewing. I am sorry you read it without the bonus points added to it.
Comment from Jonez08
A nice relaxing chapter, Barbara. Seems they are coming to an understanding. Sarah still appear hesitant to trust, but she is trying. Look forward to the next.
"The clothes didn't call your name saying, 'Sara, fold me, please'?"
(lol..cute)
Right now he's acting like the same man I fell in love with. I wonder how long it'll last.
--my head just hit the desk. Why does she think like this
Cassandra
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011
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A nice relaxing chapter, Barbara. Seems they are coming to an understanding. Sarah still appear hesitant to trust, but she is trying. Look forward to the next.
"The clothes didn't call your name saying, 'Sara, fold me, please'?"
(lol..cute)
Right now he's acting like the same man I fell in love with. I wonder how long it'll last.
--my head just hit the desk. Why does she think like this
Cassandra
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011
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Sara has issues. But I wonder how many of us would not have issues with everything she has gone through. I appreciate your review.
Comment from rkstata
I think this is really good. I enjoyed reading it, though I don't really understand the part at the end. Could you just clear me up on that? Anyways, keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011
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I think this is really good. I enjoyed reading it, though I don't really understand the part at the end. Could you just clear me up on that? Anyways, keep up the good work!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011
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While Joe was searching for Cassie, Sara had some major issues trusting Joe. She is asking if they still have a relationship. She is very insecure. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Two people stepping carefully around each other. It'll be interesting to see if they can accept each other for what they are. I suspect the dance will be a long one.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Two people stepping carefully around each other. It'll be interesting to see if they can accept each other for what they are. I suspect the dance will be a long one.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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I can't wait to see how long the dance lasts myself. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tellis
See now that's the way she should act and I hope she and Joe get together. He's a good man and a tough one. I enjoyed reading this excellent spag free chapter.
Tellis
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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See now that's the way she should act and I hope she and Joe get together. He's a good man and a tough one. I enjoyed reading this excellent spag free chapter.
Tellis
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support. I appreciate both.
Comment from animatqua
Tease, tease,tease! Of course those last lines are supposed to be tantalizing, and you do that very well. Fifty pages left. Part of me wants to eat them up; part of me wants to savor the story just a little longer.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Tease, tease,tease! Of course those last lines are supposed to be tantalizing, and you do that very well. Fifty pages left. Part of me wants to eat them up; part of me wants to savor the story just a little longer.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from tango494
I love the way you write, and I can't wait to go back and read the previous chapters. The narrative and flow work so well to entrap the reader. You have some real talent, keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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I love the way you write, and I can't wait to go back and read the previous chapters. The narrative and flow work so well to entrap the reader. You have some real talent, keep up the great work.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Missey
Good work on this chapter. I really like it. I especially like the last line, and the dialogue about the ducks.
"I like the living room's walls one color."
This sentence doesn't make sense to me.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Good work on this chapter. I really like it. I especially like the last line, and the dialogue about the ducks.
"I like the living room's walls one color."
This sentence doesn't make sense to me.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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If you remember while Sara was painting the living room she couldn't make up her mind and she had three different colors on the walls. It's making reference to that. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from marcii
This is a nice chapter about how things are settling
down after every that has happened with Cassie etc...
As I was reading this I thought it would be almost the end of the story. Ending nicely with them back together, I'm really surprised their are 50 more pages.
Marcii
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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This is a nice chapter about how things are settling
down after every that has happened with Cassie etc...
As I was reading this I thought it would be almost the end of the story. Ending nicely with them back together, I'm really surprised their are 50 more pages.
Marcii
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Scornwell
I found this as well written as I have come to expect. Your characters remain strong and the dialog sounds realistic and seems appropriate for the characters.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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I found this as well written as I have come to expect. Your characters remain strong and the dialog sounds realistic and seems appropriate for the characters.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
