Bludgeon
for an Auschwitz survivor102 total reviews
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Victortouche,
You should add "The boy in the striped pajamas" to your reading list. It gives it a slightly different perspective, but certainly brings home the horror.
Excellent poem.
Patrick
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Hi Victortouche,
You should add "The boy in the striped pajamas" to your reading list. It gives it a slightly different perspective, but certainly brings home the horror.
Excellent poem.
Patrick
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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I'm sure you are right Patrick. Thank you for reading me.
Comment from MikiB
Excellent writing on this poem here about a Bludgeon. A club that will come knock him out. He compares it to Auschwitz, although I don't think he's that bad off.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Excellent writing on this poem here about a Bludgeon. A club that will come knock him out. He compares it to Auschwitz, although I don't think he's that bad off.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading Miki.
Comment from georgehandy
There is a very powerful strenght her friend. The sense really got to me. I cannot falult the grammar and i do see where you are writingfrom. It s strong but nt tooveryhitting in the gut. good work,
I just posted one caljed Last Letter From Grandfather
I think you might findsomething that will relate.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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There is a very powerful strenght her friend. The sense really got to me. I cannot falult the grammar and i do see where you are writingfrom. It s strong but nt tooveryhitting in the gut. good work,
I just posted one caljed Last Letter From Grandfather
I think you might findsomething that will relate.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Thank you Mr. Handy.
Comment from c00kieface925
The poem is presented nicely and the piece is very strong and flows smoothly. It felt sort of like a drum beat the way I read it and I really enjoyed it. Nice Work
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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The poem is presented nicely and the piece is very strong and flows smoothly. It felt sort of like a drum beat the way I read it and I really enjoyed it. Nice Work
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading it Ms. Cookie.
Comment from Patricia0129
Oh what a sad thing. It is amazing so many were lost and that those that participated in the attempt of exterminating could not feel the wrong of this thing. I pray rest comes to you and bless you for the compassion you have... for I too just see us as people...we are all just people..we all hurt we all bleed, we are all Gods people.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Oh what a sad thing. It is amazing so many were lost and that those that participated in the attempt of exterminating could not feel the wrong of this thing. I pray rest comes to you and bless you for the compassion you have... for I too just see us as people...we are all just people..we all hurt we all bleed, we are all Gods people.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Yes, we are all human. What other animal species does this?
Comment from sharkymark
This tells of suffering and pain that arrives in human affairs,the dialogue is good, it could of used a little more expressive words but point still taken.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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This tells of suffering and pain that arrives in human affairs,the dialogue is good, it could of used a little more expressive words but point still taken.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Thank you.
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Your welcome
Comment from donnadiann
This is a sensitive message of suffering that reveals an even deeper message. I'm trying to understand it, and it's so sad. i can feel the emotions regardless if I have them right or not. It seems the subject of whom you write is beckoning death, or God to take away self - and not focus on what's going on, but focus on faith. I'm not sure, but this is a dynamic poem.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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This is a sensitive message of suffering that reveals an even deeper message. I'm trying to understand it, and it's so sad. i can feel the emotions regardless if I have them right or not. It seems the subject of whom you write is beckoning death, or God to take away self - and not focus on what's going on, but focus on faith. I'm not sure, but this is a dynamic poem.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Thank you, and I would say you have it essentially right. Besides poems should not hit everyone the same. So your interpretation is by definition valid.
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You are welcome. Thank you, also.
Comment from eagle eye cherry
Your ignobility, a person of common origin or deemed to be of low birth is awaiting a beating, by a bludgeon.
This person placed within the confines of a concentration camp is showing pain from being emotionally beaten down too. This is another message of how horrible history can be in war torn countries.
The artwork's entrance of a "ghostown" concentration camp befits your poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2011
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Your ignobility, a person of common origin or deemed to be of low birth is awaiting a beating, by a bludgeon.
This person placed within the confines of a concentration camp is showing pain from being emotionally beaten down too. This is another message of how horrible history can be in war torn countries.
The artwork's entrance of a "ghostown" concentration camp befits your poem. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2011
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Thank you.
Comment from Endless Gibberish
A deeply heartwrenching and heart felt piece. The book at which you drew your inspiration, in a sense, is very powerful and you have matched the strength her with this poem/
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2011
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A deeply heartwrenching and heart felt piece. The book at which you drew your inspiration, in a sense, is very powerful and you have matched the strength her with this poem/
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2011
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That is certainly a profound compliment which I thank you for.
Comment from Kathy58
This is a wonderful tribute to all the families that were sent to concentration camps and never made it out. The whole thought of the atrocity truly just nauseates me. You have written an exceptional piece about such a horrific thing. Great writing. Kathy58
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This is a wonderful tribute to all the families that were sent to concentration camps and never made it out. The whole thought of the atrocity truly just nauseates me. You have written an exceptional piece about such a horrific thing. Great writing. Kathy58
Comment Written 07-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2011
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Kathy, it is comforting to know there are other individuals out there that can empathize such as you. Thank you.
