Dear Lexi
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Ensconced Within My Soul""Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus
21 total reviews
Comment from sasil
Such a clear, concise moment and emotion captured here in this short, near-heart shaped verse. Lovely way to capture this sweet memory and grant it immortality. Best to you in your recovery, and in your poetry.
S.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Such a clear, concise moment and emotion captured here in this short, near-heart shaped verse. Lovely way to capture this sweet memory and grant it immortality. Best to you in your recovery, and in your poetry.
S.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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thank you so much, sasil -- love, jan
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Comment from Lady & Louis
"Zoom mode" lol - maybe she's been channelling a cat and getting into cuddle mode for once! :P
Lovely poem, dear Baroness, that speaks of all sorts of love, for me.
Louise xxxx
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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"Zoom mode" lol - maybe she's been channelling a cat and getting into cuddle mode for once! :P
Lovely poem, dear Baroness, that speaks of all sorts of love, for me.
Louise xxxx
Comment Written 06-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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thanks, milady -- I just love holding that little booger -- love, jan
Comment from babylonia
jan,
i'm so glad that you are able to have lexi with you again. i know that means more to you than anything. very sorry to hear about the pancretitis. that's no fun. i love it when my daughter wants to snuggle with me. she's seven now. i know that soon enough she won't want me hugging her. sigh. i'm so happy you are doing better.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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jan,
i'm so glad that you are able to have lexi with you again. i know that means more to you than anything. very sorry to hear about the pancretitis. that's no fun. i love it when my daughter wants to snuggle with me. she's seven now. i know that soon enough she won't want me hugging her. sigh. i'm so happy you are doing better.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 06-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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thanks so much, babylonia, for this exceptional rating. I am humbled and honored. Lexi has been snuggling a lot today, too. She's had an ear infection and a cold -- I think she just likes having her nanny close by. Love, jan
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jan,
is she still snuggling? i hope she is. i hope you are doing well. i read this last week and thought i had written back. oh well. just hope you are doing well.
love,
barbara
Comment from Showboat
HA! I didn't need to read your notes to know who this little ditty was written for. Smiles!
How wonderful. Now you need to keep these all together and one day, publish a little book of Lexi's Poems of Love.
Let me know, Jan!
Hugs and love,
Gayle
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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HA! I didn't need to read your notes to know who this little ditty was written for. Smiles!
How wonderful. Now you need to keep these all together and one day, publish a little book of Lexi's Poems of Love.
Let me know, Jan!
Hugs and love,
Gayle
Comment Written 06-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Gayle: I am writing a book for Lexi called Dear Lexi -- it is here on fanstory -- love, jan
Comment from Aski
I like your title. With your granddaughter's head in your heart and soul is a wonderful way to be, especially if one anticipates the future and you foresee the same continuing. Then it won't just be the head but her mind.
The visual image of the poem compliments the idea--your granddaughter seeping into your being. Very well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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I like your title. With your granddaughter's head in your heart and soul is a wonderful way to be, especially if one anticipates the future and you foresee the same continuing. Then it won't just be the head but her mind.
The visual image of the poem compliments the idea--your granddaughter seeping into your being. Very well done.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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thanks, Aski -- love, jan
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello Jan and the poem is just simply lovely! I really loved it, especially the last line. I wish you the best in the contest. HAve a great day, Loyd
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Hello Jan and the poem is just simply lovely! I really loved it, especially the last line. I wish you the best in the contest. HAve a great day, Loyd
Comment Written 06-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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thanks, Loyd -- love, jan
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my pleasure, Loyd
Comment from heyjude
Jan, You've done a marvelous job of describing how all we
grandparents feel when that special little one is with us.
They manage to plant themselves deeply within our hearts.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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Jan, You've done a marvelous job of describing how all we
grandparents feel when that special little one is with us.
They manage to plant themselves deeply within our hearts.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2011
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yes, they do, Jude -- love, jan
Comment from Yeti777
A gorgeous tribute to your granddaughter, Lexi. I was very moved by this very unique genre of poetry, in the way you've used it to relay a special moment. True to the intent of a nonet, you have succeeded with this one. Thanks for posting.
Sean
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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A gorgeous tribute to your granddaughter, Lexi. I was very moved by this very unique genre of poetry, in the way you've used it to relay a special moment. True to the intent of a nonet, you have succeeded with this one. Thanks for posting.
Sean
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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thanks, Sean -- love, jan
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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thanks, Charlie -- love, jan
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You're welcome, Jan. Charlie
Comment from sgalletti
Jan...I am so happy for you and this special gift of your relationship with Lexi which you describe so beautifully in this nonet poem. The imagery in the first two lines is lovely. The deep, honest, simple sentiment in the last four lines beautiful. Best of luck in this contest. Sue
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Jan...I am so happy for you and this special gift of your relationship with Lexi which you describe so beautifully in this nonet poem. The imagery in the first two lines is lovely. The deep, honest, simple sentiment in the last four lines beautiful. Best of luck in this contest. Sue
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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thanks, Sue -- she has my heart, for sure -- love, jan
