Pet Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "The Good Life"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from Descendingriverstar
Story aside as it is well written-
I personally find it interesting that we imagine ourselves, as humans, to be the 'master' or 'mistress' of our pets. I feel that personification of animals into a kind of servitude is particularly one-sided and humanist(for want of a better word).
At the same time, one may argue that we are given/have dominion over animals; an argument supported by various faiths. In that sense my reproach of some kind of mastership over the animal kingdom would be debatable.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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Story aside as it is well written-
I personally find it interesting that we imagine ourselves, as humans, to be the 'master' or 'mistress' of our pets. I feel that personification of animals into a kind of servitude is particularly one-sided and humanist(for want of a better word).
At the same time, one may argue that we are given/have dominion over animals; an argument supported by various faiths. In that sense my reproach of some kind of mastership over the animal kingdom would be debatable.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. Your comments are well heard; I guess I'm honoring a favorite author here - Albert Payson Terhune - he wrote innumerable books about dogs - he referred to himself and his wife as 'Master' and 'Mistress.' I'm pretty sure my animals feel that they are TOTALLY in charge around my house! LOL! Thank you for reading. ~patty~
Comment from bowls
Such a lovely, tender account of Harley's adjustment to his new home and routine. You seem to be so happy with him and he with you. I'm loving every single detail of the story and hope to read more soon.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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Such a lovely, tender account of Harley's adjustment to his new home and routine. You seem to be so happy with him and he with you. I'm loving every single detail of the story and hope to read more soon.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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Thank you for continuing to read the saga of Harley. I appreciate the generous review and your kind remarks. ~patty~
Comment from sweetwoodjax
oh no, that is so cute, i really enjoyed reading this but i don't think harley will like the vet too much on that next visit, i look forward to reading that chapter....
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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oh no, that is so cute, i really enjoyed reading this but i don't think harley will like the vet too much on that next visit, i look forward to reading that chapter....
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's saga. The NEXT Vet visit should be a different experience for the little guy! Your generous review and kind remarks made me smile. ~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
"Neuter" is definitely not in Harley's vocabulary. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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"Neuter" is definitely not in Harley's vocabulary. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for continuing to read the saga of Harley. I'm having way too much fun with this and him. ~patty~
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You're welcome, Patty. Charlie
Comment from sizemore0409
Hi Patty! I enjoyed reading this latest addition to your story. The writing has good consistency. As in prior chapters, I like your attention to detail, as you carefully construct the narrative, which flows smoothly and seamlessly. The imagery, the character-depictions and interactions, the thoughts, dialogue and emotions are all well-crafted, and woven nicely into the fabric of the story. Good work! Andy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Hi Patty! I enjoyed reading this latest addition to your story. The writing has good consistency. As in prior chapters, I like your attention to detail, as you carefully construct the narrative, which flows smoothly and seamlessly. The imagery, the character-depictions and interactions, the thoughts, dialogue and emotions are all well-crafted, and woven nicely into the fabric of the story. Good work! Andy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for continuing to read Harley's saga. Your remarks and constructive critique are greatly appreciated. ~patty~
Comment from llake
I enjoyed reading this so much I went back and read through the previous chapters. Lovely story. I own a Peek-a-pooh and we often make up conversations with her and sometimes wonder what she is thinking. I like how you have him thinking like a human, "...wait until he gets a grown-up voice." Bendi thinks she is human. To me she is my little girl.
I would like to make one suggestion. The second paragraph, first sentence, instead of ...Mistress, and the other person..." Maybe leave out the "and", "...Mistress, the other person that comes and goes is just the Man." I think it gives it a nice flow.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
llake
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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I enjoyed reading this so much I went back and read through the previous chapters. Lovely story. I own a Peek-a-pooh and we often make up conversations with her and sometimes wonder what she is thinking. I like how you have him thinking like a human, "...wait until he gets a grown-up voice." Bendi thinks she is human. To me she is my little girl.
I would like to make one suggestion. The second paragraph, first sentence, instead of ...Mistress, and the other person..." Maybe leave out the "and", "...Mistress, the other person that comes and goes is just the Man." I think it gives it a nice flow.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
llake
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I appreciate your thoughtful suggestion, and I will make the change - it does flow better. Thanks! ~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is very enjoyable. I think you describe his thoughts very well from his point of view. My dog is tired of watching me type and is trying to get my attention. Guess they have something in common! Debbie
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This is very enjoyable. I think you describe his thoughts very well from his point of view. My dog is tired of watching me type and is trying to get my attention. Guess they have something in common! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for following Harley's saga. Yes, he seems to accept that I spend a bunch of time at the computer, but he really doesn't like it. ~patty~
Comment from sweetsilversong
Awww, Harley's first visit to the vets, how did he take his first shots?
I can hear his little yelp all the way to England.
Patty, so glad he's settling in nicely, he'll soon give those cat's a run for their money.
Best wishes.
SSS
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Awww, Harley's first visit to the vets, how did he take his first shots?
I can hear his little yelp all the way to England.
Patty, so glad he's settling in nicely, he'll soon give those cat's a run for their money.
Best wishes.
SSS
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Believe it or not - he did NOT yelp at all. He took his shots like a little man! Thanks for reading and the generous review. ~patty~
Comment from koneart
WHAT! Harley doesn't sleep on the BED! I love the 'game of his choice' - Very funny! Very well done. [did he yelp when he got his shot?] Take care - have FUN! Kone
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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WHAT! Harley doesn't sleep on the BED! I love the 'game of his choice' - Very funny! Very well done. [did he yelp when he got his shot?] Take care - have FUN! Kone
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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No! Harley does NOT sleep on the bed - MAYBE once we get through the potty training, . . . but no! (That domain belongs to the cats.) He did NOT yelp when he got his shots - BRAVE PUPPY! Thanks so much for reading and the generous review. ~patty~
