Comment from Patricia Crandall

Excellent

First of all I love cats. I have a stray we adopted, Bette. This poem flows well and describes the workings of a cat's mind. From your words, Leo patiently awaits his turn when she will pay attention to him and not that dog. You have followed the rules. Good luck in the contest.

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Hi Patricia; thank you for the lovely review. Leo was a very patient cat. He never did warm up to Harley though,
~patty~

Comment from JennaG

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this poem! We have two cats and a dog. I'm pretty sure our cats feel the same way about dogs as Leo does. Lol ;) I love a good happy ending, so I especially enjoyed when Leo got his time. I also enjoyed learning about the diminished hexaverse. That form is totally new to me and I love trying out new poetic forms. I might just have to give this one a try! It looks fun! Anyway, this was a fabulous poem! It was truly a pleasure to read. :)

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Hi Jenna; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. Currently, I only have two dogs, but I like to remember the times where I lived with two cats and a dog. It made for an interesting time!
~patty~

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

I like your Leo poem. It expresses well what it is like to have two pets and the attempt at giving them equal time. I experience that myself. When one is more demanding than the other, it is difficult to keep the balance, right. You did a great job with your sweet poem.

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Hi Nancy; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your time and kind words of encouragement. Leo was very patient and very kind. Thought I'm sure he wanted to, he never attacked Harley!
~patty~

Comment from Gianinas

Excellent

Very nice!
If inteligent/patient enough, the cat will find her place/love.
The Leo story can be motivational even for humans.
Best,
Gianina

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Hi Gianina; thank you for your time to read and review. I appreciate your understanding words, and yes, I think humans could benefit from this lesson, too.

~patty~

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is great. I enjoyed your Diminished Hexaverse. Such a fun form. I've got to try one of these myself. Your Leo is adorable (all cats are). Your poem, so well done, brought a smile as my kitty is always eager for her time with me, too. Marilyn.

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Hi Marilyn; thank you so much for your time to review. You really should try this poetic form. It was a fun challenge to write,
~patty~

reply by BeasPeas on 29-May-2017

Hi Patty. I have already copied down the rules for the form. I love it and will try one soon. Thank you so much for posting yours. Marilyn

reply by the author on 29-May-2017

you're welcome

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

A cute little poem about Leo the jealous feline.
Very well written with terrific imagery and an excellent pace.
Lovely character.
Very enjoyable read.
Michael

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Hi Michael; I do appreciate your time to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

LOL!!! Your writing always brings a smile to my face. Thank you. I've been a little down--not too bad but was hoping for a better diagnosis. (I've been in a lot of pain and was hoping it would just go away, but it won't, oh well, could be worse.)

I need to fan you. :)

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Hi Rasmine; I'm so sorry to hear you aren't doing well. I will put you on my prayer list.

Thank you for your time to read and review,
~patty~

Comment from crzypnter

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem to Leo and like most cats he is one patient fellow. The picture is great and your poem works well for the style chosen. Thanks for sharing

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Very effective use of the Diminishing Hexaverse format to describe a likely daily activity interaction between your cat and your dog. It flowed well, and was a delight to read and follow. Here's to Pets everywhere!

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

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reply by the author on 28-May-2017

Hi; thank you so much for reading and reviewing this little poem about Leo. He was a wonderful cat, and though he's been gone since 2012, I still miss him,
~patty~

Comment from alvina224224

Exceptional

Well, here's yet another poetry form I want to try. Today I've been introduced to s diamente and a DwaZy, but this Diminished Hexaverse really intrigues me. You've applied the requirements exactly in this poem to a cat, (yours?) and the illustration chosen picks up the wording and images excellently. Especially, 'grey fur reflects light'

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reply by the author on 28-May-2017

Hi; thank you so much for this lovely review of this poem for Leo. He was a wonderful cat. Though he has been gone since 2012, I still miss him,
~patty~