Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Sara and Dani talk."Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from patmedium
beautifully done. Full of tension and sadness. You have writtwen this marvellouslt well, dear Barbara. Now I'm off to the next.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2011
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beautifully done. Full of tension and sadness. You have writtwen this marvellouslt well, dear Barbara. Now I'm off to the next.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I have missed you, but I understand you've been busy.
Comment from trmartin
Really love the dialogue. This is the first chapter I have read so I am not 100% sure what led everyone to this point in the discussion. I did though find it very easy to understand what was happening in this particular scene.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2011
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Really love the dialogue. This is the first chapter I have read so I am not 100% sure what led everyone to this point in the discussion. I did though find it very easy to understand what was happening in this particular scene.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Glynnis W
Barb,
I'm behind in my chapters, but since this one is the current posting I went ahead and read it. I'll try to play catch up. Interesting work. Nice plot and character development. Sara has some thinking to do. Best wishes for the coming year.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Barb,
I'm behind in my chapters, but since this one is the current posting I went ahead and read it. I'll try to play catch up. Interesting work. Nice plot and character development. Sara has some thinking to do. Best wishes for the coming year.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from MyYiaYia
Sounds like Sarah has a hard decision to make. I hope she doesn't take too long to make it. Men like Joe are hard to come by and he may not stick around where he thinks he isn't wanted. Great chapter and I didn't find any SPAG. Deb :0)
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Sounds like Sarah has a hard decision to make. I hope she doesn't take too long to make it. Men like Joe are hard to come by and he may not stick around where he thinks he isn't wanted. Great chapter and I didn't find any SPAG. Deb :0)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from fionageorge
Another excellent chapter, with good dialogue. I especially enjoyed the discussion and emotions between the two woman, Dani and Sara. And yes, Sara is forced to take a look at herself and her trust in Joe.
I didn't find any spag, and thought the whole chapter was well written and flowed easily.
Warmest regards, Marijke
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Another excellent chapter, with good dialogue. I especially enjoyed the discussion and emotions between the two woman, Dani and Sara. And yes, Sara is forced to take a look at herself and her trust in Joe.
I didn't find any spag, and thought the whole chapter was well written and flowed easily.
Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Scornwell
I thought this was as well written as the previous chapters. The characters come across well and the dialog is realistic and seems consistent with the characters.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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I thought this was as well written as the previous chapters. The characters come across well and the dialog is realistic and seems consistent with the characters.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual. Dani coming back to talk to Sara is a nice touch. George taking Cassie to her grandparents is also a nice touch. Sara is all alone to make her decision.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual. Dani coming back to talk to Sara is a nice touch. George taking Cassie to her grandparents is also a nice touch. Sara is all alone to make her decision.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from KATYBUG:)
beautiful book chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! job well donneee!!:) i like rainbows tooooo lol weeeeeeeee :) lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeee ya girll
great writeeeee!!! ima jealous!
love
katy
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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beautiful book chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! job well donneee!!:) i like rainbows tooooo lol weeeeeeeee :) lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeee ya girll
great writeeeee!!! ima jealous!
love
katy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your excitement.
Comment from acvguard11
great job..truely deserves the recognition and all time best award....dont let others discourage you if you love to write....just keep doing what you are amazing at...great job and keep writing
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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great job..truely deserves the recognition and all time best award....dont let others discourage you if you love to write....just keep doing what you are amazing at...great job and keep writing
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from jmdg1954
I've been remiss in reading some previous chapters after having been thorough in the beginning. Time and work has prevented me mostly. Picking up from here, you have continued the story with credible and believable dialogue and story lines. One can pick up most chapter and read them as a seemingly stand alone story. Nicely done...
Again, sorry for the lapse... John
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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I've been remiss in reading some previous chapters after having been thorough in the beginning. Time and work has prevented me mostly. Picking up from here, you have continued the story with credible and believable dialogue and story lines. One can pick up most chapter and read them as a seemingly stand alone story. Nicely done...
Again, sorry for the lapse... John
Comment Written 05-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
