Pet Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Gilligan; my little buddy"...musings on the pets I've had
26 total reviews
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is a very good piece of work. It is well written, well edited, and well presented. The flow is good and easy to follow, there are no adjustments needed.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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This is a very good piece of work. It is well written, well edited, and well presented. The flow is good and easy to follow, there are no adjustments needed.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. ~patty~
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
what an adorable picture and great poetic tribute to your for pawed roommate . i really enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing. i like the line "loneliness chased away."
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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what an adorable picture and great poetic tribute to your for pawed roommate . i really enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing. i like the line "loneliness chased away."
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. ~patty~
Comment from lepton37
totally wonderful - thank you. the chaser of loneliness, the protector while you're away, the sipping from your glass - you completely captured his essence. great acrostic!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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totally wonderful - thank you. the chaser of loneliness, the protector while you're away, the sipping from your glass - you completely captured his essence. great acrostic!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. ~patty~
Comment from Hayley_Loubear
Fantastic poem, really enjoyed it, cute cat as well =] You've done really well to rhyme - I find it hard sometimes to rhyme in acrostic poems but it flows really well x
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Fantastic poem, really enjoyed it, cute cat as well =] You've done really well to rhyme - I find it hard sometimes to rhyme in acrostic poems but it flows really well x
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I was quite surprised when I could rhyme! This was a fun poem to write. ~patty~
Comment from sweetsilversong
A wonderful Acrostic, Patty
I love the feeling you have towards animals and it excels with the written word.
Your Authors notes had me holding back the tears.
Best wishes as always.
SSS
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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A wonderful Acrostic, Patty
I love the feeling you have towards animals and it excels with the written word.
Your Authors notes had me holding back the tears.
Best wishes as always.
SSS
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading and your very generous review. I'm touched that you enjoy my poems and stories about animals - they are FUN to write about, and it brings me great joy. ~patty~
Comment from judy corcoran
how lovely - a beautiful acrostic about your friend
it's sad when they leave - whether when they die... or just disappear...
it's a lovely thought that he went off to be some-one in need's angel
i love your animal poetry patty
it brings back good memories of my past friends
love to you
judy
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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how lovely - a beautiful acrostic about your friend
it's sad when they leave - whether when they die... or just disappear...
it's a lovely thought that he went off to be some-one in need's angel
i love your animal poetry patty
it brings back good memories of my past friends
love to you
judy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading, Judy. Gilly was so special, and though I still miss him, I know he had his own reason for leaving - I was back with my family, so I guess he thought he was no longer needed. Thanks for reading! ~patty~
Comment from Ann Smith
The poem has good rhythm and rhyme with details that show how much you enjoyed the company of this cat. Thank you for the author's note. Sometimes cats have to move on. They are their own boss that's for sure. ann
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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The poem has good rhythm and rhyme with details that show how much you enjoyed the company of this cat. Thank you for the author's note. Sometimes cats have to move on. They are their own boss that's for sure. ann
Comment Written 02-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I greatly appreciate your kind words - Gilly was SPECIAL. ~patty~
Comment from adewpearl
Gilligan sounds like he was quite the roommate - someone to wait your return from school so he could nibble your ties, how adorable :-) Your lines flow well and have strong rhyme - I'm so sorry he left you, but you have a good attitude about it :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Gilligan sounds like he was quite the roommate - someone to wait your return from school so he could nibble your ties, how adorable :-) Your lines flow well and have strong rhyme - I'm so sorry he left you, but you have a good attitude about it :-) Brooke
Comment Written 02-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I greatly appreciate your kind words - Gilly was SPECIAL. ~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I don't know how you managed to hide a cat. I'm so glad you had him though. Pets are often better company than humans. I think everyone should have a therapy pet!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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I don't know how you managed to hide a cat. I'm so glad you had him though. Pets are often better company than humans. I think everyone should have a therapy pet!!! Debbie
Comment Written 02-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I greatly appreciate your kind words - Gilly was SPECIAL. ~patty~
Comment from ANM (Warlock)
This poem was good. It is a pretty simplistic idea that works well. Although I had to admit I thought it was going to be about Gilligan's Island. It was a good read.
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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This poem was good. It is a pretty simplistic idea that works well. Although I had to admit I thought it was going to be about Gilligan's Island. It was a good read.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I greatly appreciate your kind words - Gilly was SPECIAL. ~patty~
