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Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Harley meets Simba and Leo"
...musings on the pets I've had

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Comment from nancy_e_davis
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I enjoyed the story about Harlie's home coming very much. The imagery was good as I watched the story unfold. It is not easy to introduce a new animal to the other ones already calling it home..Once they realize they are there to stay they accept it. well done Patty. Nancy

 Comment Written 14-May-2017


reply by the author on 14-May-2017
    Hi Nancy; thank you so much for your kind words about the introduction of Harley into the animal series. He was a great little dog.
    ~patty~
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Patty, a lovely continuation. I love cats and always had them in my life. We sadly just lost two so now we're down to three. Lovely story you're writing and I look forward to more tales. No pun intended. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 14-May-2017


reply by the author on 14-May-2017
    Hi Ulla; thank you so much for continuing to read the saga of the animals who have come and gone through my life. I'm glad you are enjoying their tails, um, tales,
    ~patty~
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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PETA wants to know if your dogs gave you permission to write about the? My cats want to know if they will get equal time. They are thinking of filing a discrimination lawsuit.

Please govern yourself accordingly.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017


reply by the author on 14-May-2017
    LOL!!! As much as I spoil my furry critters - I feel entitled to steal their thoughts and feelings to write about them. Tell PETA to mind its own business. As for your cats, send me some pictures, and I'm sure I can write about them, too,
    thank you for my morning chuckle,
    ~patty~
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Although I am not a cat fancier, not even by any stretch of the imagination, this storyline contains enough ongoing action to keep the tale engaging.

Several different directions you could travel this accounting in from this point forward about their antics.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017


reply by the author on 14-May-2017
    Hi Brett; thank you so much for stopping by to read. The dog and the cats do become good friends, and I will be releasing their stories over the next few months,
    ~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written story. We can never tell how animals will behave when they meet a new pet. Usually after the first introduction they become very good friends and do all kind of things together.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017


reply by the author on 14-May-2017
    Hi Sandra; thank you for reading this introduction to another character in my animal stories. Harley was a wonderful Jack Russell terrier that shared my life for awhile,
    ~patty~
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Oh the animal lover in me is cry out for more of this. Your wiring is excellent with the POV you have chosen. I had to give up my cat and the last time I saw her was another family taking her crate away with them and I have heard nothing from them. I pray this is what happened

 Comment Written 14-May-2017


reply by the author on 14-May-2017
    Hi Barb; Harley is a new character in the cast of my pet stories. He was a wonderful Jack Russell terrier that shared my life for awhile. He was certainly a challenge for Simba and Leo. Thank you for reading along - I'm glad you enjoy my animal stories,
    ~patty~
Comment from Realist101
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HA! Jealousy at a newcomer! It's natural, but scary at first. We have had so many cats and dogs, they eventually get used to each other! Some quicker than others...I bet by now your babies are all getting along real well? I hope! And is this pix of you?? You are SOoo young! ") Beautiful too...susan

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
    Simba NOW plays his own games with Harley - and loves to use his huge paws to bat Harley around! Their favorite game is to 'play' through the big glass french doors to my den. Simba sits on the outside while Harley is in with me. Simba pretends to growl the whole time, and Harley runs back and forth - its pretty comical. Leo keeps his distance, but loves to look at Harley through the baby gate when Harley is in the kitchen. ~patty~
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Mustangpatty,

This is a delightful story written from the perspective of Harley. I need to go back and read the first chapter even though I haven't read it I could easily figure out what is going on. Poor Harley had never seen a cat before...what a surprise! You wrote this story very well and I was engaged in it from the first line to the last. Well doe. Blessings, chey

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
    Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind words and remarks. I just received a POOR on one of my Harley stories because the reviewer doesn't believe we should give animals 'human' qualities. I will be over it, but right now, I'm like - then hit SKIP!!! ~patty~
reply by cheyennewy on 05-Jan-2011
    I hate it when reviewers let their personal opinion get in the way when they review. There is nothing fair about it and we should tell them that!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
    Thanks for your thoughts - I 'muted' her and simply 'thanked' her for reading and reviewing. Oh well. Off to write another Harley story!! LOL!
Comment from animatqua
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This is a cute portrayal from an animal's point of view. There are a couple of places that are iffy--like the thoughts about `the wheel'. I doubt animals have a concept of wheel. Most people wouldn't be so nit picky, but I thought I'd mention it.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
    Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ~patty~
Comment from CodyJack
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This was great with detail and how the animal tried to get to be friends with the other dog and the cat. It is amazing how the first initial meeting can take place. You never know how it will go. Great poem. I felt like I was there watching this. Keep it up. Your friend, Cody

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2011


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
    Thank you for continuing to read the saga of Harley. I appreciate the generous review and your kind remarks. ~patty~