Pet Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Harley meets Simba and Leo"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from Bichon
Haha aww, such an adorable story. I could visualise his black and white little face and his stubbly tail perfectly. What an adorable pup and his new best friends the kitties.
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Haha aww, such an adorable story. I could visualise his black and white little face and his stubbly tail perfectly. What an adorable pup and his new best friends the kitties.
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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Hi Chloe; thank you so much for reading along with my pet stories. There are more adventures to come,
~patty~
Comment from JDRBAR
Very good at interpreting a pup's reactions to his new world. I think if I brought a puppy into my house, my cat, Cashew, would eat him for lunch. LOL. I liked this very much.
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Very good at interpreting a pup's reactions to his new world. I think if I brought a puppy into my house, my cat, Cashew, would eat him for lunch. LOL. I liked this very much.
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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thank you so much for reading along with my pet stories. There are more adventures to come,
~patty~
Comment from mbroyles2
I can't imagine how our dog would react to a new addition to the family. I think all in all Harley handled it very well.
Such a delight to read about your pets. Past and present.
Michael
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I can't imagine how our dog would react to a new addition to the family. I think all in all Harley handled it very well.
Such a delight to read about your pets. Past and present.
Michael
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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Hi Michael; thank you so much for reading along with my pet stories. There are more adventures to come,
~patty~
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I was so pleased to find you'd left a story for me in my PM box, Patty.
Harley's such a character - I wish all the stories on FS were so entertaining
and easy to read as yours - such a tonic.
Margaret
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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I was so pleased to find you'd left a story for me in my PM box, Patty.
Harley's such a character - I wish all the stories on FS were so entertaining
and easy to read as yours - such a tonic.
Margaret
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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Hi Margaret - your words make me so happy! I'm glad you are enjoying my pet stories,
~patty~
Comment from apky
What a great finish. You do this so well, Patty, I wish I'd be one of your pets.
>>She was humming and softly calling his name. She bent down and picked him up and cradled him in her arms. He gratefully licked the face he now knew was his pal. With a soft sigh, he cuddled in the crook of her arm, and quickly fell asleep. He would get those animals later. Right now, he just needed some shut-eye.<<
Right, time for some shut-eye indeed.
Aki
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What a great finish. You do this so well, Patty, I wish I'd be one of your pets.
>>She was humming and softly calling his name. She bent down and picked him up and cradled him in her arms. He gratefully licked the face he now knew was his pal. With a soft sigh, he cuddled in the crook of her arm, and quickly fell asleep. He would get those animals later. Right now, he just needed some shut-eye.<<
Right, time for some shut-eye indeed.
Aki
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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Hi Aki; thank you so much for stopping by to read a pet story about Harley. He has the starring role in quite a few stories. I appreciate you following along,
~patty~
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
'She was humming and softly calling his name. She bent down and picked him up and cradled him in her arms.(Oh!What I wouldn't give!) He gratefully licked the face he now knew was his pal. With a soft sigh, he cuddled in the crook of her arm, and quickly fell asleep. He would get those animals later. Right now, he just needed some shut-eye.'
Felines are magic I do believe! They soothe my soul and make me so happy! I love every write from you you are ace at providing deliciously light happy writes as well as more serious work, wonderful love Meia x
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'She was humming and softly calling his name. She bent down and picked him up and cradled him in her arms.(Oh!What I wouldn't give!) He gratefully licked the face he now knew was his pal. With a soft sigh, he cuddled in the crook of her arm, and quickly fell asleep. He would get those animals later. Right now, he just needed some shut-eye.'
Felines are magic I do believe! They soothe my soul and make me so happy! I love every write from you you are ace at providing deliciously light happy writes as well as more serious work, wonderful love Meia x
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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Hi Meia; thank you so much for your warm words of praise. I'm so glad you like my animal stories, as well as my other writes!
~patty~ xoxox
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Oh Mustangpatty, I am so in love with this story. I am so happy that you revived it. It is so well written and it captured my heart. It made me smile a whole lot, even a laugh and then even a small tear drop. This is a very moving and touching story. You describe these animals so excellently. You really know your animals.
Applause...applause...applause...
She put his crate in the front seat of the car, and faced the opening towards her. She made the car move with a big wheel and there was music coming from in front of him and a few other places, too. His eyes kept going back to her face to study her. He didn't want her to know he was studying her, so every time she looked at him, he looked away.
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Oh Mustangpatty, I am so in love with this story. I am so happy that you revived it. It is so well written and it captured my heart. It made me smile a whole lot, even a laugh and then even a small tear drop. This is a very moving and touching story. You describe these animals so excellently. You really know your animals.
Applause...applause...applause...
She put his crate in the front seat of the car, and faced the opening towards her. She made the car move with a big wheel and there was music coming from in front of him and a few other places, too. His eyes kept going back to her face to study her. He didn't want her to know he was studying her, so every time she looked at him, he looked away.
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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Hi Tier; I'm so glad you liked this story. Harley was probably one of the best dogs I've ever known. He and Simba grew to tolerate one another - their biggest problem was who got the most time with me.
Thank you so much for your warm review and shiny stars,
~patty~
Comment from Sanku
That was fantastic .Thank you very much for writing about these lovely animals .I was so relieved tht it was not about aliens or shoot outs and other violent images.
The first meeting was dramatic,.You have written very well from the point of view of
harley .
a smooth read .i enjoyed this very much.
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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That was fantastic .Thank you very much for writing about these lovely animals .I was so relieved tht it was not about aliens or shoot outs and other violent images.
The first meeting was dramatic,.You have written very well from the point of view of
harley .
a smooth read .i enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. I don't 'do' violence or shoot outs - no worries here. I'm glad you enjoyed the story,
~patty~
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Patty
Introducing a new pet, on this occasion a dog, into an established feline world will prove for an interesting few weeks as the pecking order is established. Taking Harley's POV was spot on.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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Good morning, Patty
Introducing a new pet, on this occasion a dog, into an established feline world will prove for an interesting few weeks as the pecking order is established. Taking Harley's POV was spot on.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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Hi Ray; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments and kind words,
~patty~
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a good descriptive piece about introducing a new kitten into the home. Everything is new and strange. Sometimes the pecking-order gets upset while animals decide who is top dog or cat.
CG
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This is a good descriptive piece about introducing a new kitten into the home. Everything is new and strange. Sometimes the pecking-order gets upset while animals decide who is top dog or cat.
CG
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 15-May-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story,
~patty~
