Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

This black-and-white photo is so appropriate here. It's hard to imagine a more gruesome picture painted with so few words - the power of innuendo!
Giddy

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010

Thank you so much Giddy. I really appreciate your excellent review! Bev

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

Mystery and crime in a senryu. Now you can add suspense to it as we wait for the senryu that answers the question. We could all venture a guess but only one knows the answer.
Well done, Buck

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010

Thank you so much Buck. I really appreciate your encouragement and review. Bev

Comment from Lady & Louis

Excellent

Now that's an intriguing idea - a crime mystery senryu! Very clever, and talk about packing cryptic clues into a short space. Accident or intent, we'll never know, will we? Well done!

Cheers,
Louise :)

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 Comment Written 26-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2010

Thanks so much for wonderful review. Glad you enjoyed it Lady!

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

What DID happen on the bridge? Hard to tell, harder even to imagine with all the colors in the snow. A tiny mystery here. HOw nouveau!!!!!!

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 Comment Written 26-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2010

I'm going to be a brat and not tell! Thanks so much for your great review. Best, Bev

reply by Gungalo on 26-Dec-2010

Oh you ARE a brat, Bev. You know my vivid imagination has already got ideas. LOL.

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2010

I would expect no less of you my dear! B