Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Loving, licking, loyal - love the alliterative descriptions, all such positive, happy words - your enthusiasm for Harley shines through each line. I really like how he is in action, yelping and jumping, very much the way a puppy is :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2010

Thank you so much, Brooke. I'm glad that the activeness of Harley shines through in these words. (I'm very tired - but so happy!) Thanks for reading and the generous review. ~patty~

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

I don't know that I'd want to try this form, but you did a good job, and it's apparent that you love that little pal of yours. I'm assuming you already have a Christmas gift for him. We had a dachshund that loved opening Christmas gifts and finding Easter eggs (that he would bring to us without breaking).

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 Comment Written 20-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2010

Thank you for reading and the generous review. Harley has a few gifts for under the tree. (However, the gifts won't be under the tree this year - why tempt the little guy?) I appreciate the story about your dachshund - I love hearing about everyone's pets; one more way for me to make connections! ~patty~